GeauxColonels Posted September 22, 2014 Share Posted September 22, 2014 C & D are both nice. I think they both work given the curves and angles in the logo. If I had to pick out of the 2, I think I would go with D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted September 22, 2014 Share Posted September 22, 2014 Inspiration struck, so in the meantime, here's a re-branded Washington Redskins team. What do you think?This would work if the outer points of the 'W' were less elongated. The star seems more reminiscent of communist China than the U.S. Capitol, but thats hardly your fault for working with the existing colour scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 22, 2014 Author Share Posted September 22, 2014 I made an executive decision and opted for D - what do you think? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted September 22, 2014 Share Posted September 22, 2014 Inspiration struck, so in the meantime, here's a re-branded Washington Redskins team. What do you think?This would work if the outer points of the 'W' were less elongated. The star seems more reminiscent of communist China than the U.S. Capitol, but thats hardly your fault for working with the existing colour scheme.This logo reminds me of Werder Bremen. But, aside from that it's a nice retool. Also, I'd say most of these updates are fantastic. But, I'm a little stuck on the Browns, Ravens, and Jags. The Browns bulldog is a little too cartoony for my taste and as someone else mentioned it needs to be more realistic to feel Cleveland to me. The Raven head is impressive, but just a little too dark and too much purple. Try to lighten it up a bit and work on the shape of the head. For the Jags, you have a great start, but it seems more is needed. Keep up the good work! NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 22, 2014 Share Posted September 22, 2014 i think its still kind of blank. try putting fur marks in the white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 24, 2014 Author Share Posted September 24, 2014 i think its still kind of blank. try putting fur marks in the whiteCould you elaborate on that? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 this was kind of sloppy and quick but you get my piont. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 I'd remove the round white area completely and go "flying Elvis" with it and make it one solid black line. Right now, it looks like a tumor or something. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted October 7, 2014 Share Posted October 7, 2014 I think if you put marks in the middle of the monument in the Federals logo, It'd be more reconnisable as a football. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 14, 2014 Author Share Posted October 14, 2014 The more I look at the Jags logo, the more I like it the way it is. However, now that the Logolympiad is finished, I had some time to revisit the Eagles. I completely started over, and I'm really happy with this look. Here's the new Philly Eagles! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SG89 Posted October 14, 2014 Share Posted October 14, 2014 I comprehend that the grey you used it the one they used to use, however I believe the logo would look better if you used a darker grey, or possibly black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted October 15, 2014 Share Posted October 15, 2014 it looked alot better than the original one which you did FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted October 18, 2014 Share Posted October 18, 2014 I like it. something bothers me about that empty green neck... Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 23, 2014 Author Share Posted October 23, 2014 Here's the new look Rams!#buffaslugftw My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted October 23, 2014 Share Posted October 23, 2014 looks like there is something worng. with his eye. other than that its great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbdaniel15 Posted October 23, 2014 Share Posted October 23, 2014 Great work as usual. My only concern is the R looks a little goofy. Maybe making it more of a crisper curve would help, or maybe even bringing the entire text down to the ground level would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted October 24, 2014 Share Posted October 24, 2014 I second the wonky eyes. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 24, 2014 Author Share Posted October 24, 2014 Ok, what specifically about the eye? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted October 24, 2014 Share Posted October 24, 2014 I think its the eyebrow it looks to long or something. I would make the horn more like their current one & the R does not need the spike on top. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted October 24, 2014 Share Posted October 24, 2014 I think its the eyebrow it looks to long or something. I would make the horn more like their current one & the R does not need the spike on top.Maybe the eyebrow is too thick? That's definitely the source of the strangeness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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