derschwigg Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. ...That's because it is.Oh really? Well either way I say take a different routeRemember that time a GIANT gorilla attacked New York in that famous movie? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Ravens and Bengals.I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. nope! Bengals, and the CARDINALS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Ravens and Bengals.I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. nope! Bengals, and the CARDINALS!Nope. He did the Cardinals. But it wasn't the Ravens, it was Cleveland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 Ravens and Bengals.I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. nope! Bengals, and the CARDINALS!Nope. He did the Cardinals. But it wasn't the Ravens, it was Cleveland.If you read further, I said I didn't like the Cardinals, so I nixed it. It is the Bengals and the Ravens.This was Cleveland (I even made a time lapse on this one), And this was Baltimore: My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Seahwks and raiders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DustDevil61 Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Bengals and...Eagles (you said you were revamping them, no)? AKA @LanRovr0 on Twitter LED Sig Credits to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Seahwks and raidersbeen there, done thatBengals and...Eagles (you said you were revamping them, no)?was he? I think he did.I've still got the Bengals, the Giants and The Cardinals.THERE YOU GO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
euroclub Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 The Cleveland Browns one is the best one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 I like it. It's different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Ravens and Bengals.I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. What you you have against gorillas?Love it personally, because I like gorillas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Ravens and Bengals.I don't like the Giants. It looks like a gorilla. What you you have against gorillas?Love it personally, because I like gorillas.I don't have anything against gorillas, I just don't think it screams "GIANTS". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 The raven looks great, but you couldn't look into that bird's beak that much from that angle. I'm especially referring to the upper part of the beak. It should be closed. Right now it seems as if the lateral part of the beak can be opened. “Never argue with an idiot! They will only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.” ––George Carlin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 I love your work but I think you could have done much better with the Rams. It's a cool idea but I just see alot of inconsistency.1. Both horns have rounded tips where as the rest of the logo has very pointed features.2. The left side of the face just feels like it wasn't touched at all. The eye seems to not exist at all and there is too much empty space on that horn, just looks like a yellow blob with no accents or high lights. 3. The horn placement on the head seems uneven and inconsistent. Right horn has an arched design whereas the left has a rounded bottom. Shouldn't they both be arched? I could draw up a quick fix to highlight the areas in question - as help, not to be offensive. I this could be a really cool logo. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 Here's a quick draw about the things I found could be improved. I sharpened the horns on both sides. On the left horn, I thought you could show the curve of the horn with a lighter shade on top and darker shade on the bottom end giving it more depth. The point between the horns was added just to separate the horns, i feel they are too close. And back to the left eye - or lack there of - just needs to be redrawn. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted December 11, 2014 Author Share Posted December 11, 2014 Here's a quick draw about the things I found could be improved. I sharpened the horns on both sides. On the left horn, I thought you could show the curve of the horn with a lighter shade on top and darker shade on the bottom end giving it more depth. The point between the horns was added just to separate the horns, i feel they are too close. And back to the left eye - or lack there of - just needs to be redrawn.Taking a closer look at it, there are a number of inconsistencies in the mark. I'll tweak it a bit before I close the book on the project. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted December 12, 2014 Author Share Posted December 12, 2014 Here's the newest Cardinals! I went in a completely different direction with it. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted December 12, 2014 Share Posted December 12, 2014 Uhhh why don't you try either the A or the Cardinal, mixing them doesn't look right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted December 12, 2014 Author Share Posted December 12, 2014 Uhhh why don't you try either the A or the Cardinal, mixing them doesn't look right.This is not feedback. Explain to me what you feel is off, don't just say something's off and call it good. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted December 12, 2014 Share Posted December 12, 2014 Uhhh why don't you try either the A or the Cardinal, mixing them doesn't look right.This is not feedback. Explain to me what you feel is off, don't just say something's off and call it good.Okay. The wing looks like it's just there so it can be there. Either remove that, or try a bird instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted December 12, 2014 Author Share Posted December 12, 2014 Uhhh why don't you try either the A or the Cardinal, mixing them doesn't look right.This is not feedback. Explain to me what you feel is off, don't just say something's off and call it good.Okay. The wing looks like it's just there so it can be there. Either remove that, or try a bird instead.Better.But I disagree. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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