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I like the Tampa Bay Rays fauxback uniforms and I decided to try and create a new logo around that idea. Dunno what else to say but ask what your thoughts are?

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I'm not sure if I should or not, but I love this. R logo is a tad hard to distinguish as an R, almost a P, but it's not bad. Nice work here!

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I'm really liking this. Feels a little San Diego Chargers though. And I agree with kevsim1, the R is a little off. This has a lot of potential.

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Nice job. But I agree with the others--the R is hard to make out. In fact, I can't tell whether it's supposed to be capital or lower-case. If it's the latter, raise the stem a little bit to where it doesn't look hidden behind the ray. Other than that, I really like it.

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Thanks for the comments so far. I didn't even think about the R/P issue. I'll bug with it to see what I can't do to make it more clear.

@Chilton: Yes the font itself is a lower case R (to match the 'ays') but the sunstar is supposed to interlock with it to make it look like a capital R.

I will be honest I'm not sure where the R logo would go on really anything.

@macalesterscots: What do you feel is awkward about the B?

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The "B" is fine, don't listen to them, they're just used to the perfect "B" they regularly use. If I'm correct, you meant it to look like that.

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The "B" is fine, don't listen to them, they're just used to the perfect "B" they regularly use. If I'm correct, you meant it to look like that.

Yeah I just wanted to see where they're coming from. The cap logo is what I felt best about. My main goal now is R/P.

I guess secondary would be unChargering it but I think that's just gonna come with the territory of color choice and I like these colors.

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Also have some cap logos to consider

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@macalesterscots: What do you feel is awkward about the B?

I just thought it looked strange being flat on top but rounded on the bottom. Also that the top half of the B is longer than the bottom half which gives the appearance of it being misshapen. But it's your concept, if that's the way you wanted it to look then you do you

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Try fixing the 3rd logo as said above, it does look more like a P than a R. Also, I like the TB font you used, I would ignore the comments made above about changing the B.

For color scheme, I like making the yellow a more major color. Definitely would add some uniqueness to the color scheme.

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Changed the blue to 50% Titans Navy and 50% the Blue I used in the first place and changed the star's position to help eliminate the R/P issue

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Changed the blue to 50% Titans Navy and 50% the Blue I used in the first place and changed the star's position to help eliminate the R/P issue

I like this one, the others not so much. I for one prefer their ray logo over they're silly little starburst thingy, its way more original.

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I'm not so sure how I feel about this. The newest script almost looks as if it were for some sort of cleaning product like Lysol or Windex.

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