Ragone Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Well I have recently switched over to illustrator from photoshop as I wanted cleaner logos. I have slowly progressed into creating ok logos on illustrator but there are still some major faults. I just wanted to show you guys a wolf logo I began working on. The colors are just placeholders and will be changing. I just wanted feedback on how I can improve this logo as it is certainly needed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Looks really sharp!! I like it!! It does look more like a dog than a wolf though but it does look astounding and you definitely got that cleaner logo you were looking for. Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Looks great! I'd say with the ears, yes I read the colour placeholder part, but in the case with the current colours on the ears, fill in with back, and then add some green, i dunno, depth? like here:kinda make the outside the main colour of the fur, with that black stuff in the ears being the green on yours.Other than that, looks fantastic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 Looks really sharp!! I like it!! It does look more like a dog than a wolf though but it does look astounding and you definitely got that cleaner logo you were looking for. Nice job!Thanks man.Looks great! I'd say with the ears, yes I read the colour placeholder part, but in the case with the current colours on the ears, fill in with back, and then add some green, i dunno, depth? like here:kinda make the outside the main colour of the fur, with that black stuff in the ears being the green on yours.Other than that, looks fantastic! Yeah I see what your saying. Thanks for the feedback, I agree with the depth issue. That's why I posted this. Thanks a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Looks really sharp!! I like it!! It does look more like a dog than a wolf though but it does look astounding and you definitely got that cleaner logo you were looking for. Nice job!Thanks man.Looks great! I'd say with the ears, yes I read the colour placeholder part, but in the case with the current colours on the ears, fill in with back, and then add some green, i dunno, depth? like here:kinda make the outside the main colour of the fur, with that black stuff in the ears being the green on yours.Other than that, looks fantastic! Yeah I see what your saying. Thanks for the feedback, I agree with the depth issue. That's why I posted this. Thanks a lot.No problem! Yeah, it was just kinda, since the outline is green, that could very possibly be 2 black hairs on the top of its head connecting. Looking great so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 Looks really sharp!! I like it!! It does look more like a dog than a wolf though but it does look astounding and you definitely got that cleaner logo you were looking for. Nice job!Thanks man.Looks great! I'd say with the ears, yes I read the colour placeholder part, but in the case with the current colours on the ears, fill in with back, and then add some green, i dunno, depth? like here:kinda make the outside the main colour of the fur, with that black stuff in the ears being the green on yours.Other than that, looks fantastic! Yeah I see what your saying. Thanks for the feedback, I agree with the depth issue. That's why I posted this. Thanks a lot.No problem! Yeah, it was just kinda, since the outline is green, that could very possibly be 2 black hairs on the top of its head connecting. Looking great so far!Yeah I agree! Thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 the mouth doesnt look mean enough, looks like he has a smirk. and the last change would fix the ears. idk what it is but they seem "unrealistic". Love It! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 First off, what style are you looking for? Cartoon? Realistic? Maybe think of some logos that are in the same "vein" as what you're envisioning. Overall I'd say look over the nose. A wolf will have a longer snout and larger nose compared to a dog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 the mouth doesnt look mean enough, looks like he has a smirk. and the last change would fix the ears. idk what it is but they seem "unrealistic". Love It!Yeah I agree with the mouth. And for the ears the reference image I used had the ears like that but I think I'm just portraying them wrong. Will definitely work on them.First off, what style are you looking for? Cartoon? Realistic? Maybe think of some logos that are in the same "vein" as what you're envisioning. Overall I'd say look over the nose. A wolf will have a longer snout and larger nose compared to a dog.Yeah I see what your saying with the snout, that was bugging me too. Will definitely lengthen the snout and a larger nose. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Well I have recently switched over to illustrator from photoshop as I wanted cleaner logos. I have slowly progressed into creating ok logos on illustrator but there are still some major faults. I just wanted to show you guys a wolf logo I began working on. The colors are just placeholders and will be changing. I just wanted feedback on how I can improve this logo as it is certainly needed. Thanks.It's a great start. For me, the nose is a bit too pointy. The head seems a bit flat up top as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 Take a look at some wolves for reference, as for the logo right now, it's a bit fluffy and abnormal.Hmm I see. I think I agree with you on that. I will definitely cut down on the "fluffyness." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Alright so I cleaned up the wolf a bit. For right now I cleaned up the actual shape of the wolf. I fixed the ears, I think at least. I think it's looking better than the original but I would like to get more feedback. Thanks a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Could you post the first version with those colors? It would make comparing them easier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Is this your (Columbus?) Coyotes logo for your football league? That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancealot Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 The upturned snout makes me think of a fox more than a wolf but other than that its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 MUCH BETTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragone Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Is this your (Columbus?) Coyotes logo for your football league?This was going to serve as the basis to it. But, I'm not sure. I was just kind of playing around in illustrator trying to get used to it. So yes maybe.The upturned snout makes me think of a fox more than a wolf but other than that its goodHmm, I kind of do get the whole fox vibe from it. Will definitely work on it but thanks.MUCH BETTERThanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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