FunnyHeadlines Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 The eyes look like a prize fighter but I love this logo 1000x better than what they already have.These are good but the current logo is golden and I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 The eyes look like a prize fighter but I love this logo 1000x better than what they already have.These are good but the current logo is golden and I love it. If you think that the Thunder's current logo is golden, I'm not sure that you should be giving feedback. That logo is the worst in a league that doesn't have many good ones. As for this concept, I agree that the eyes should have some definition. I am also unsure as to why the shield around head is being used, I think it is better by itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 The eyes look like a prize fighter but I love this logo 1000x better than what they already have.These are good but the current logo is golden and I love it. If you think that the Thunder's current logo is golden, I'm not sure that you should be giving feedback. That logo is the worst in a league that doesn't have many good ones. As for this concept, I agree that the eyes should have some definition. I am also unsure as to why the shield around head is being used, I think it is better by itself.Do either of these look better? Also, I have the shield for three reasons; it keeps a little bit of their current shape, it adds a little Oklahoma to the logo (high Native American population and the whole state used to be "Indian Territory"), and it seems to be in keping with the league style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I think that the second one is the best of the three, but it isn't that fierce or intimidating. Eyes are hard to get just right though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 This is it, I really like the eyes on this one. I tried many different iterations and this was the only one that didn't make it look cartoony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Just joining in, this last piece is a great improvement of how the start was. My only gripe is that the eyes look like he is cross-eyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 This one by far is the best so far. There is the cross eyed issue but I don't think it is bad enough to really worry about, great progression! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Thanks all, I'm really liking the way these are turning out. I can imagine these marks on t-shirts, hoodies, etc. Next I need to try to tackle jerseys and wordmarks. Here are two of the arrowhead-shield looks w/ eyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I think if you put a little pupil in there it will work on the latest version for they eye. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 I think if you put a little pupil in there it will work on the latest version for they eye.This is what it looks like with pupils. I feel that it loses some of it's ominous feeling, which is the same feeling some people get when they hear thunder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I think thats great really brings in all the elements to me My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Thanks all, I'm really liking the way these are turning out. I can imagine these marks on t-shirts, hoodies, etc. Next I need to try to tackle jerseys and wordmarks. Here are two of the arrowhead-shield looks w/ eyes:I think if you put a little pupil in there it will work on the latest version for they eye.This is what it looks like with pupils. I feel that it loses some of it's ominous feeling, which is the same feeling some people get when they hear thunder.I think thats great really brings in all the elements to meI don't know if I can agree. I think it still seems menacing, but in more of a "mean kid" kind of way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 27, 2014 Author Share Posted February 27, 2014 These are quickly put together, but give a good idea of what could work. I'm not intending them to be used together, they are two separate thoughts. And yes the first is just slapped on their previous setup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 27, 2014 Author Share Posted February 27, 2014 This is my next step, more unique: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 got some potential with that sketch there. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 28, 2014 Author Share Posted February 28, 2014 Here are my thoughts for wordmarks; the first two are more serious and the last 3 are more for fun (and I do realize that the arrowhead shape is not straight). Love to have some thoughts on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted February 28, 2014 Share Posted February 28, 2014 I just got in on this topic. I think the best option was the third option. The thunderhead cloud with the bison profile, shear brilliance. And agree about how terrible their current logo is, I am not artistic at all and could have come up with something better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 28, 2014 Author Share Posted February 28, 2014 I just got in on this topic. I think the best option was the third option. The thunderhead cloud with the bison profile, shear brilliance. And agree about how terrible their current logo is, I am not artistic at all and could have come up with something better.Thank you for the compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 28, 2014 Share Posted February 28, 2014 Last one is too much on the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gator71 Posted February 28, 2014 Share Posted February 28, 2014 Try the red buffalo with the blue mountains on a yellow background. Sorry guess it's not mountains. Oops. I meant arrowhead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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