BTL Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Bjelovar GREENHORNSver. 2 The Bjelovar GREENHORNS were founded in 2008.Their colours are green and yellow, but for this concept I went with the green and white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Looks way much better. Who is up next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Looks way much better. Who is up nextRijeka ARMADA will be next.Once again, thank you all for your constructive criticism. It turned out way, way better than the 1st version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 I would have said flat city name, shadow on team name. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Rijeka ARMADA The inspiration for this team came from the soccer club Rijeka,from which I took the colors and their supporters group from which I took the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 The A looks like a tilted 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 The A looks like a tilted 4.Is that a good thing or a bad thing? The A is actually sort of like the main symbol of the supporters group, I just modified it a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Eeeej još netko iz Hrvatske, to mi se sviđa. Morat ću na engleskom da svi kontaju šta kažem hehehe. I like Rijeka Armada, but the thing that I don't like is the numbers and player font. Try playing and make the numbers resemble the wordmark. Just make sure they're legible. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Morao sam zguglat legible, di si samo tu riječ našao. Ajde i ja ću na engleskom da se ne žale.A fellow Croat, nice. I love your work on the basketball courts.I will play a bit with the numbers, maybe i'll come up with something, we'll see.Make sure you follow the thread, I would really like to hear your opinions on the rest of the teams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Hahaha dugo sam na ovom forumu pa sam pokupio izraza. I like the Greenhorns as well, especially the monogram of GH and it kinda resembles a football. But I don't see the reason for that shadow under the main logo. Its a little bit confusing. Can't wait to see what's next.Welcome! Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Hahaha dugo sam na ovom forumu pa sam pokupio izraza. I like the Greenhorns as well, especially the monogram of GH and it kinda resembles a football. But I don't see the reason for that shadow under the main logo. Its a little bit confusing. Can't wait to see what's next.Welcome!Haha I was hoping somebody would notice that.To tell you the thruth, I don't know why I put that shadow underneath, it kinda just happend and I thought it looked good so I left it.Next up will be the Požega JAILBIRDS and I'm warning you: It's a bit alot cartoonish and a bit out there, but thats for a reason. Jail is hard as it is so they need a bit of cheering up. I'm joking, I like how it looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Brace yourself, the Jailbirds are coming. Požega JAILBIRDS Obviously, the inspiration for the team came from the fact that there's a jail in Požega.The colours of the city of Požega are blue and yellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Looks great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 27, 2014 Author Share Posted February 27, 2014 I decided to add a helmet concept for each team so here are the helmet concepts for the GREENHORNS, ARMADA and JAILBIRDS: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 GREAT work. The updated wordmark for the Greenhorns is great. I like what you did with the Armada concept. My only suggestion would be make the numbers a little bit smaller, thin the stroke around the numbers and use a double outline like you have in the logo and wordmark. I really like the choice of "Jailbirds" as a nickname. You're right, they are very cartoonish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 27, 2014 Author Share Posted February 27, 2014 GREAT work. The updated wordmark for the Greenhorns is great. I like what you did with the Armada concept. My only suggestion would be make the numbers a little bit smaller, thin the stroke around the numbers and use a double outline like you have in the logo and wordmark. I really like the choice of "Jailbirds" as a nickname. You're right, they are very cartoonish.Thank you, i'm glad you like it. I will definitely do something with the Armada numbers.I know the numbers on all of my concepts are a little bit big but I REALLY love big numbers on jerseys.Next up will be the Krk ISLANDERS.Correction: The ISLANDERS aren't quite looking the way I want so instead next will be the 2 Zagreb teams: THUNDER and PATRIOTS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dado Posted February 28, 2014 Author Share Posted February 28, 2014 Zagreb PATRIOTS The Zagreb PATRIOTS were founded in 2010.Their colours are black and gold.The logo is a letter P in glagoljica - the oldest known Slavic alphabet from the 9th century. I acually like the logo so I didn't change much, I just re-colored it and I made a new wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted February 28, 2014 Share Posted February 28, 2014 Great work again dado Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 It looks great, but I was expecting a team called the Patriots to be more... patriotic. Possibly something checkerboard based on the flag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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