wonderbread Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 That template is awful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 I like the template as long as it's accompanied with a flat version. So far, you have some very unique designs in this thread that I think would work for international basketball. Can't say I'm a fan of that font for France, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moom Posted July 13, 2014 Author Share Posted July 13, 2014 That template is awfulThanks for the reply! How so? instagramtwitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moom Posted July 13, 2014 Author Share Posted July 13, 2014 I like the template as long as it's accompanied with a flat version. So far, you have some very unique designs in this thread that I think would work for international basketball. Can't say I'm a fan of that font for France, though.Cheers, thanks for the feedback! Yeah the fonts a bit avant-garde looking, I'll probably add the bar in the R and A. instagramtwitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 Because it looks like someone just took the cloths and threw them on the screen, a template should be flat without wrinkles and have everything symmetrical. Your jersey needs a back view and maybe side view and shorts need a front view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moom Posted July 13, 2014 Author Share Posted July 13, 2014 Hey thanks for the reply! I see your point! I was never into the paint thing, I much prefer a more 'organic' look when I design, hence the 'kit lying on the floor' template. It still gets the point of the kit across quite clearly; any other view ( save the back view,though that just shows the font) would be rather superfluous. As much as I appreciate the feedback I do think 'awful' is a rather negative and uncalled for. I believe it's just extremely different from what's posted here. Which is essentially what I'm going for! Cheers! instagramtwitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 The original template is far superior, I get what you're trying to achieve with the new one but it's not working. It's taking away from the actual design and making it hard to convey exactly what the jersey would look like. Do we usually see jerseys crumbled up on the floor or do we see them on a player? Most designs are done on a flat template so it's easy to replicate. I'd suggest the same thing CAB did, supplement this template would a flat one and I think it would improve!Love the previous uniforms, China is wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 13, 2014 Share Posted July 13, 2014 I've got to agree with Chris on the template...the last one was great with the shorts and I'd just stick with that one. The new one is interesting, as it is different from any other templates I've seen. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moom Posted July 13, 2014 Author Share Posted July 13, 2014 China's basketball jersey looks great. Will you be willing to try Estonia's basketball jersey. Their not that good in basketball but it would be unique to see a concept of Estonia's b-ball jerseySorry about the wacky nature of this one, not sure if its a home or away, but its something outside the box! Estonia Basketball Kit instagramtwitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted July 14, 2014 Share Posted July 14, 2014 I think I understand where the template is going and having some sort of background to accompany it, will help people see it. You can throw a normal jersey on the floor - wrinkled and all - and someone could judge it the same if it was flat, take away the background, their attention is taken away from the actual jersey and they are more focused on the odd shape. It's definitely an interesting template, but I too would like to see it accompanied by a flat template clean of any "realistic" effects. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted July 14, 2014 Share Posted July 14, 2014 I think I understand where the template is going and having some sort of background to accompany it, will help people see it. You can throw a normal jersey on the floor - wrinkled and all - and someone could judge it the same if it was flat, take away the background, their attention is taken away from the actual jersey and they are more focused on the odd shape. It's definitely an interesting template, but I too would like to see it accompanied by a flat template clean of any "realistic" effects.Agreed, either have a flat template with the wrinkled. Or you could do the flat template and the template in which the playeris wearing the jersey. I also like the look of Estonia. For a request, could we see Denmark? That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moom Posted July 15, 2014 Author Share Posted July 15, 2014 I think I understand where the template is going and having some sort of background to accompany it, will help people see it. You can throw a normal jersey on the floor - wrinkled and all - and someone could judge it the same if it was flat, take away the background, their attention is taken away from the actual jersey and they are more focused on the odd shape. It's definitely an interesting template, but I too would like to see it accompanied by a flat template clean of any "realistic" effects.Agreed, either have a flat template with the wrinkled. Or you could do the flat template and the template in which the playeris wearing the jersey. I also like the look of Estonia.For a request, could we see Denmark?Heres Denmark. I went with a different jersey type for this one. instagramtwitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted July 15, 2014 Share Posted July 15, 2014 I actually don't mind the template that much. It would be nice to see the back of the jersey, though. That said, because it appears you are sticking with this template, I would suggest making the background more of a contrast, the way you have done with Denmark. France and Estonia have white in the uniform and you're using a white background. Maybe it's just my eyes (and it's still early), but the white, the background, the wrinkles... there's a lot that starts to get muddled.As for the designs themselves, everything in the original template is great. Although the font is off-putting for France, I think you did a good job of translating what Nike would/could do. If you picked black or white as the primary for Estonia, then used the blues as accents, that would be much better. Right now, the Estonia top kind of looks like a distance runner's jersey. No issues with Denmark. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Germanshepherd Posted July 15, 2014 Share Posted July 15, 2014 Denmark is far too plain, it really lacks the creativity you showed in your other designs try to add some piping or more noticeable sublimation, keep up the good work. i have unquantifiable corpses on my conscience Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted July 15, 2014 Share Posted July 15, 2014 I'm back! Big hiatus, but better late than never. Using a new basketball template thats around 5000px wide ( the pic below is shrunk) , which i'll be posting to my webstore soon @ footballtemplates.blogspot.comHeres the template in action!France Basketball :How did he do the lines in the upper part of the jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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