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NFL Redesign ***(fixing Browns and Patriots logo)***

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First up da Bills.

http://imgur.com/a/c4jqK#0

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ok

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I'm so excited first concept!!!!!

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When I click the link, it says, "llfhockey's images are not publicly available."

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try now

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Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much sharper design. His presentation is top notch too.

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Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much more sharper design. His presentation is top notch too.

Did I ask you about Raysox's NFL redesign no. I use MS Paint I can only do so much. + imgur is a little pixly

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Fixed # size and took # off of helmet

http://llfhockey.imgur.com/all/

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Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much more sharper design. His presentation is top notch too.

Did I ask you about Raysox's NFL redesign no. I use MS Paint I can only do so much. + imgur is a little pixly

This shouldn't be an excuse. I still can't see the image because the link is broken for me.

However, MS Paint can still make great concepts if you take the time and effort.

Also, Inkscape is a free vector software for anyone to download. Sure it might take you a couple of days to learn some basics (I recommend YouTube tutorials) but your concepts will not only be easier to make, but they will look so much better.

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Take the logo off the sleeve stripes, it just clutters it.

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Just got the link to work.

The overall opinion I got from it at first glance is a mix of modern and traditional, which can work sometimes but with this I don't think it doesn. With the mix of the brighter red and blue in this concept it gives me a modern feel, especially with the font chosen. However, the modernized look is halted with a very conservative striping pattern.

Another thing to point out that I think should be switched. The pants striping is opposite of the ones found on the helmet and jerseys. I think if you flip those to fit the set it would look better. (That's something the actual Bills uniforms also lack, the unified striping throughout the uniform).

Overall it's on it's way. Like stated, Execution can be improved, but that can always be improved on. Good start, for your first concept ever it's much better than most I see on these boards and just in general.

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Thanks! didn't know aboot that pants stripe I will fix it. In the mean time any more comments before bump?

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Bump Fixed Buffalo

Now give all lot of credit to the artist who made toothpaste dolphin and their unis.this took for ever

http://llfhockey.imgur.com/all/

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Its far to similar to the bills,and the helmet needs to stay white or have the logo with a white outline

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It has a faint out line on the helmet and I didn't know what to do for design. I didn't want it to be blank

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I like the Bills striping but I would prefer to see the numbers white. That's just a personal preference. I also wouldn't mind you using the throwback logo, but that's also a personal preference. Congrats on the first concept. Try and take the critiques posted from some of the veteran concept posters to tweak up your presentation. The presentation is rough but the concepts aren't half bad.

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Wonka how do you get templates in from paint and use them

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