davidmiller5 Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 This is much better. Now I think the biggest issue is the blue wedge coming down from the top of his mouth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Alright, time for an update. First of all, thank you all for the great C&C, I've tried to take into account what ya'all have said so far. That being said, I've left the neck portion in for now. It helps create that oval shape that I really enjoy. The teeth have been updated, a tongue has been added, and the eye is now white. I've also made a few adjustments to the neck. Keep those comments coming.As an added bonus, I've updated my FSU logo with the new feather and a few other adjustments. How would you like to see these two face off?As much as I hate the gators... that's a bad ass update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbdaniel15 Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 This is much better. Now I think the biggest issue is the blue wedge coming down from the top of his mouth.Agreed. Maybe try changing the color of the tongue from orange to something else? It just makes that blue curve kind of awkward. Other than that, I love it! An awesome mesh of modern enhancement and traditional Florida Gators. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bhdesigns4 Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 I think theres an issue with the fsu update the pic isnt quite showing up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted April 22, 2014 Author Share Posted April 22, 2014 I think theres an issue with the fsu update the pic isnt quite showing upYou are correct. Looks like my photobucket bandwidth was exceeded. Here you are: https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted April 25, 2014 Author Share Posted April 25, 2014 I believe this will be the final update on this. Thanks to everyone for your great C&C https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted April 25, 2014 Share Posted April 25, 2014 I know you said this was the last update but the neck still is bothering me.Right now it looks like the gator is on his back but if you move the inside (light green) of the neck down some & make it smaller it would make him look like he is just looking behind if that makes sense.This looks really great I just would like to see it go to the top. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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