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Hey all,

Working on my webpage for sports concepts/portfolio and I'm kinda stuck. I have 2 designs I like, but I'm not sure what to go with. Now when you look at these, they probably are gonna get blown up, so just make the window smaller til it fits. It should be 800 x 300 for now. I might increase later, but I kinda like the unique size right now. They are in flash, so if you don't have flash player go here if you'd like: Flash Download

Here's the Links:

Numero Uno

(doubt I'll use this music, just something I whipped up in garage band)

Numero Dos

(this will have some kind of mellow music with crickets and a loon call in the background)

Let me know what you think of either or!

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probably should have mentioned this...its more a portfolio site which will contain my concepts as well. I just need some opinions from design minded people, which you all are.

peace,

pc

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i liek them both... the first seems a little too 'template' to me. The second one looked more like it was original artwork, though it is a touch cartoony. If you don't mind that, then it is cool.

The only thing that bothered me at all was that the second one, it was always two fireflies, or none. I wanna see just one! Then, sometimes two or even three.

Wait, was that too picky?

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thanks for the comments all! I'm pretty torn myself. These are both pretty crude as of now, and they'll have mucho work done before the final is displayed. I like each for their own reasons so its hard. believe it or not the background on one is a scanned placemat, and I created the entire second one in photoshop from scratch, still needs some work as paynomind pointed out, its a bit cartoony. so I'm not sure, maybe once I keep working on them, a favorite will pop up. But, I'll keep you all posted. Thanks again

pc

ps good idea gamecock! I'll try it out!

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thanks for the comments all! I'm pretty torn myself. These are both pretty crude as of now, and they'll have mucho work done before the final is displayed. I like each for their own reasons so its hard. believe it or not the background on one is a scanned placemat, and I created the entire second one in photoshop from scratch, still needs some work as paynomind pointed out, its a bit cartoony. so I'm not sure, maybe once I keep working on them, a favorite will pop up. But, I'll keep you all posted. Thanks again

pc

ps good idea gamecock! I'll try it out!

They're both nice, but I prefer Dos for it's Midwestern feel.

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