Whittier S Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 The dragon logo has a couple of sloppy Bezier points in it. Smooth the weird bit at the font of the neck, get the back of the head closer to circular--use the spiral tool if need be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 This is my final update for Rhein. Went back to the original logo, but tweaked it a tiny bit.Original red.And the final uniform set for Rhein. Might come back to these and Barcelona's to tweak them later, but for now I'm going to press forward with more teams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 That's a spot on logo for Rhein. Color might actually hinder this unless it's just shading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 Next up we have the Cologne Centurions. In my opinion they had a pretty cool identity, so this one should be fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 New logo. Really like the original logo, so not a ton of changes. There are a few versions of the original logo out there, this update is largely unchanged but with a different jawline and shading. Wanted a brighter red for the logo to match their uniforms.New wordmark that will also serve as a secondary logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Not going to lie. With eccentric names such as Centurions and Fire, I'm a bit disappointed at the restraint shown this far. These concepts should be going all out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 So far, I'm really liking this thread. Can't wait to see the uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 Took the "Roman Centurion" theme a little too far, probably. Cape, sword hanging off the hip, and a wide helmet stripe to mimic the centurion "mohawk" helmet. Probably going to rework this one eventually, but I thought it was fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Took the "Roman Centurion" theme a little too far, probably. Cape, sword hanging off the hip, and a wide helmet stripe to mimic the centurion "mohawk" helmet. Probably going to rework this one eventually, but I thought it was fun.That's much more like it!My suggestions:Texturize the helmet stripe to better resemble the brush on top of a Roman soldier's helmet. Make the sword more minimalistic and incorporate it to better look like a stripe and less clip art on the side of football pants. This one has serious potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 19, 2014 Author Share Posted May 19, 2014 Made a few of Penny's suggested changes. Roughed up the edges of the mohawk stripe and made the sword stripe less clip art-y. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 19, 2014 Share Posted May 19, 2014 Cologne is perfect! The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted May 19, 2014 Share Posted May 19, 2014 I love everything about the Barcelona Dragons one, but i'm not really liking the fire word logo, the primary is good though. The centurions are good too, except replace the goldish yellow with dark grey or silver. Not changing Cologne's logo was also a good idea, Can't wait to see the others! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted May 19, 2014 Share Posted May 19, 2014 Sorry, but, for Cologne, I can't help but see the profile of a Cylon. Maybe show the face more to combat that.I really like the secondary, though. And the uniforms are spot-on. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 NICE!!!2 Thumms up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 Up next we have the Frankfurt Galaxy. The Phoenix Suns of NFL Europe.Decided to just update the logo and make it less pixelated. Cleaner, simpler.New wordmark. Went for a crazy, custom wrapped galaxy helmet. Carried the strong lines of the logos to the shoulders and hips. Added blue as an accent color to match the helmet a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 And, as a bonus, Frankfurt gets an "Alternate Universe" concept. Think Atomic '50s style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Up next we have the Frankfurt Galaxy. The Phoenix Suns of NFL Europe.Decided to just update the logo and make it less pixelated. Cleaner, simpler.New wordmark. Went for a crazy, custom wrapped galaxy helmet. Carried the strong lines of the logos to the shoulders and hips. Added blue as an accent color to match the helmet a little better.Yes, I do agree, that if the Phoenix Suns were a football team, they'd be just like the Frankfurt Galaxy.However, I would outline the galaxy in either red or purple, because the actual logo was intended to blend in with the helmet: The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bishop_BP_Jakes Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 And, as a bonus, Frankfurt gets an "Alternate Universe" concept. Think Atomic '50s style.Love this one. Wouldn't change a single thing about em. The "Dream of Genie" numbers really set it off imo. Good job Ballin on a budget Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 Next up we have the Scottish Claymores. Definitely in need of modernizing. In my humble opinion this set has not aged well. Cartoonish logo combined with uniforms that look like they were donated by the 1998 Carolina Panthers' practice squad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 Some may not like it, but I felt that the Claymores are team that needs a clean and classic look. Some team city/name combinations lend themselves to flash and cutting edge design, but I feel like the "Scottish Claymores" needed something more subtle. That starts with the logo - an 'S' in the font from the original wordmark on a double-edged sword-shield (a shwield). Removed the lighter blue. Navy and silver is the new color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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