jaker52 Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Well... The Raysox contest got me into soccer unis so I decided to start doing these. I will basically be making a crest and 2 kits for each world cup team in Brazil this year. I even made a logo for the series.This is how it will work:rules for me1. I will not start the uniform until you guys like the crest. 2. I will update everything until they are done well.3. This is not going to have much to do with the teams' traditional unis. This series is all about new ideas.4. I think I will usually base stuff of the flags with an occasional touch of national history.I HAVE ONE REQUEST OF YOUplease do not just say something is bad. Tell me why. Since everything is updated, your feedback will affect how the series goes.I will post a link to the finished results page once there is some final kits.I will start with team USA:I broke some of my own rules and based parts of this on old crests.Updates Coming Soon. If this turns out well liked I will go ahead and make a kit of it MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thisguyphelps Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 nice project... maybe make the crest it a little more "sporty" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Everything in that crest is not centered correctly first off. Next it looks extremely basic and uninspired. Frankly it looks like a Microsoft word project gone bad. Try to be more original and sharp and less one dimensional in design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 The wings don't fell good. Maybe removing them and putting a cartoon soccer ball. Also, the "I Believe" seems cheesy and uninspired. maybe make that a USA, and eliminate the "united states" at the top.also, cool! you made a logo for yourself. cool!!! Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 The "I believe"works as something put on the collar of the shirt, not as part of the main crest. I've always thought adding an eagle to a design would be a good start. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Not the way he did it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 also, jaker52, tanks for the signature! Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 also, jaker52, tanks for the signature!that looks nice! you're welcome! MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 crest 2.0 MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 18, 2014 Share Posted May 18, 2014 Definitely upgrade. Sill a little basic, maybe make soccer ball? bigger. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 Definitely upgrade. Sill a little basic, maybe make soccer ball? bigger. the usfc was gonna be a ball. i changed it as i went MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 this was part of the other crest i thought it might work on its own MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted May 19, 2014 Share Posted May 19, 2014 Not bad, looks a little more like a tire than a ball. Just clean it up a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Maybe make the center a 5- ptd. star, USFC across top, and bottom blank.Take soccer ball from: THIS Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 24, 2014 Author Share Posted May 24, 2014 MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 Work on the ball, there are lots of areas that arent even, and just as a whole it doesn't scream us soccer to me, looks very plain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 Glad I could serve as "inspiration." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 The ball still looks like a tire to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 24, 2014 Share Posted May 24, 2014 Replacing 90s generic with even more 90s generic. Please... no...no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Honestly theyre getting worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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