werbear Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 A while ago I tried to come up with a bear logo. I used that logo for the fantasy football season. With the next season starting up, I had thought to take another swing at a bear logo. I am still using black, white, and red to highlight the form of the logo more closely so that it is easier for me to manipulate shapes. Thanks in advance for any C&C offered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 First of all, it looks somewhat clip-arty. (This is partly influenced by the color palette).I think you need to find a good reference photo. The shapes and highlights look more like a wild pig than a bear.It's not a terrible first attempt, but it needs quite a bit of refinement. "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 It's a nice start, but not quite finished... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beddington Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 The teeth make it look like a beaver. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beddington Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 I see now that is the nose, but it took too long to see it. Case and point the color patern is confusing to the eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Critical Thinker Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 I don't even know it's a bear without being told. It looks more like a lion or tiger to me. This logo has a long way to go. I think you should go back and redraw it, and like eagle98 said, use a good photo. It's _____________ and Toledo still sucks.[insert time here] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 Reminds me of this:with beaver teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werbear Posted June 15, 2014 Author Share Posted June 15, 2014 Thanks for all the C&C seems like I have to head back to the drawing board and start from scratch. Thanks again! Always a learning experience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Thanks for all the C&C seems like I have to head back to the drawing board and start from scratch. Thanks again! Always a learning experience.When you finish your next draft, post it here again so we can see some progression My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayLars9867 Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 Do more research on bears. Look at as many logos as possible using bears. Do you have illustrator? The pen tool can do wonders! If your a student, you might be able to get a discount on it. Look into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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