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Bear Logo Second Attempt - C&C Please

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A while ago I tried to come up with a bear logo. I used that logo for the fantasy football season. With the next season starting up, I had thought to take another swing at a bear logo. I am still using black, white, and red to highlight the form of the logo more closely so that it is easier for me to manipulate shapes. Thanks in advance for any C&C offered.

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First of all, it looks somewhat clip-arty. (This is partly influenced by the color palette).

I think you need to find a good reference photo. The shapes and highlights look more like a wild pig than a bear.

It's not a terrible first attempt, but it needs quite a bit of refinement.

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I see now that is the nose, but it took too long to see it. Case and point the color patern is confusing to the eye.

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I don't even know it's a bear without being told. It looks more like a lion or tiger to me. This logo has a long way to go. I think you should go back and redraw it, and like eagle98 said, use a good photo.

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Reminds me of this:chicago-cubs-alternate-logo-5-primary.jpwith beaver teeth.

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Thanks for all the C&C seems like I have to head back to the drawing board and start from scratch. Thanks again! Always a learning experience.

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Thanks for all the C&C seems like I have to head back to the drawing board and start from scratch. Thanks again! Always a learning experience.

When you finish your next draft, post it here again so we can see some progression

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Do more research on bears. Look at as many logos as possible using bears. Do you have illustrator? The pen tool can do wonders! If your a student, you might be able to get a discount on it. Look into it.

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