hockeyny13 Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 So i started a NFL redesign a few months ago and started off rough. I've made some more designs that i like much more and would love some feedback on the concepts, even if its negative feedback. I'm starting off with the dolphins again.Away: Home: Logo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 Wow! That's a really good dolphin. The shoulder looks odd. It's maybe too high up. The darker shoulder is not bad but not a strong feature. It's almost lost because of how the body would darken during a game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSRebel22 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 This is so much better than your other thread,good job! Fins Up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Campbellwatson2 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 Wow! That's a really good dolphin. The shoulder looks odd. It's maybe too high up. The darker shoulder is not bad but not a strong feature. It's almost lost because of how the body would darken during a game.Do dolphins have shoulders? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 Sorry. Meant on the jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 I like the logo. The grey helmet looks like it has a "solar burst" detail to it. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 This is really good. If I were to change anything, though, I'd switch the blue and the orange on the home's shoulder yokes and pants stripe. Other than that, no complaints. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 no complaints as well. Looks great! Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 think that the solar burst is meant to make it look chrome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted June 8, 2014 Author Share Posted June 8, 2014 The solar burst is supposed to be chrome i didn't know how else to make it look chrome in illustrator. I'm going to move onto the bills while i continue to touch up the dolphins. I'm experimenting with how the old charging buffalo looks when modernized. Heres the reference:Away:Home:Logo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJinEI84 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 There is something about the buffalo i don't like. It kind of looks like it's having a hard time walking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 There is something about the buffalo i don't like. It kind of looks like it's having a hard time walking...it looks like it has the legs of a horse My Behance Portfolio ---Â Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvanBirchfield Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 Dolphins- Only thing I like is the logo.Bills- Only thing I don't like is the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bort Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 I like Buffalo's minus the logo. I also dislike jerseys and pants that are the same colour in general. Too unitardy for my tastes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WinMINTwins Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 The Bills logo looks really good by itself, but it seems a bit too tall on the helmet. I also wouldn't feature the logo as a chest patch. Other than that, the set is great. - Minnesota Twins - Minnesota Golden Gophers - Dallas Stars - Dallas Mavericks - Norwich City FC - - Texas Tech Red Raiders - FC Dallas - Minnesota Vikings - Borussia Dortmund -  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted June 10, 2014 Author Share Posted June 10, 2014 I like Buffalo's minus the logo. I also dislike jerseys and pants that are the same colour in general. Too unitardy for my tastes.I just put the same color pants with the same color jersey. any color pants can go with any color jersey. If you want me to i can put up the uniforms with opposite colored pants for you to see how that looks.Also, the general feel is that the bills logo needs to go but the uniform can stay so i will work on a new logo with the same uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 10, 2014 Share Posted June 10, 2014 I think the sleeve strips on the Bills should be at a different angle. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted June 14, 2014 Author Share Posted June 14, 2014 I revised the dolphins by making the stripes on the jersey bigger.Home:Away:Also, here is the Jets and the Patriots. I'm not sure which home jersey to go with for the patriots, the blue or the red. I'm going to be puttting up a bunch of concepts this weekend. Remember that jersey and pants are interchangable for each team, i just put the same color jersey with the same color pants here.Jets Home:Jets Away:Logo:Patriots Home V1:Patrios Home V2:Patriots Away:Logo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 Your numbers are very big, and I like the red for the patriots mainly because I dont like that royal color over the navy they currently use Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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