RayLars9867 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 I like your idea here. One thing that bothers me is the flames. I say try to make it one fire, rather than putting on 7 of the same shape. But what you have so far really is a great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Looks great so far..loving the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Is that really the Portland skyline? I didn't realize it was such a metrapolis. I also never realized the Oregon Trail was paved. The flames look just slapped on repeatedly. The Portland lettering is too small. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 The script doesn't look centered at all. However if you're trying to give it a moving forward look then the perspective is off. If you want it just 2D the text will have to be centered. If you want the protruding ball 3D effect with text you're going to have to add some shading to the ball and warping the text with the roundness of the ball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayLars9867 Posted June 15, 2014 Author Share Posted June 15, 2014 All points taken. It is a work in progress and I appreciate your feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 All points taken. It is a work in progress and I appreciate your feedback!And I appreciate you appreciating others C+C. Other than the fire this is a pretty decent concept in the works. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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