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New Practice Logo- C&C please

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I was going for an old boeing logo flying over clouds.

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The letters in the font, especially that S, aren't the same size. The blue trail in the back looks extremely clipart-ish, It doesn't feel centered either.

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Learned in Typography class that if a font is not the same width in all the letters you shouldn't have it placed vertically. Find a font that is the same width with all the letters.

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Quick Question on this. The reason that the S is so much larger than the other letters isn't a trick of the typeface but rather because the original Boeing logo had the G bigger than the other letters of the name. That being the case should I still ditch it even though there is history attached?

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Yes because that logo is crappy and outdated. Also notice how the strokes in that logo are way thiker than the ones in yours.

I also don't really see the "clouds" that you were going for.

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ONe thing I really dislike is the colors in yours. I don't know it makes it look old or 80's to me. Even though I didn't live in the 80's I just needed something to say it looks like a color combo that would be introduced in the past.

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