jmoe12 Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 WOOOOH that's awesome! You should seriously send that to someone over there. The braids or whatever on the right side of the shield to look a little strange though. Also did you ever consider making the sword visible? It just looks like he's awkwardly pretending to hold something that doesn't exist right nowCorrect me if I'm wrong, Ren, but I think the sword and the braids are both part of some sort of whip he's holding. Another beautiful mark, this would look great for Texas Tech Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 WOOOOH that's awesome! You should seriously send that to someone over there. The braids or whatever on the right side of the shield to look a little strange though. Also did you ever consider making the sword visible? It just looks like he's awkwardly pretending to hold something that doesn't exist right nowCorrect me if I'm wrong, Ren, but I think the sword and the braids are both part of some sort of whip he's holding. Another beautiful mark, this would look great for Texas TechWhoa how'd it I not see it! Looks good now that I see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted July 24, 2015 Author Share Posted July 24, 2015 Glad you guys are digging this latest mark. Your right jmoe12 it's not a sword it's a weapon used by gauchos called "BOLAS" which you can read about here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bolas The idea was to have it go behind the shield then come back around to the front. I might lose the handle part or make it look more rope like to avoid confusion. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 Glad you guys are digging this latest mark. Your right jmoe12 it's not a sword it's a weapon used by gauchos called "BOLAS" which you can read about here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bolas The idea was to have it go behind the shield then come back around to the front. I might lose the handle part or make it look more rope like to avoid confusion.Now I see the bolas, but before all I saw was a lightsaber. I agree that you should tweak it a bit to make it look more like a rope and less like a sword. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 I love the bolas coming around the shield, it looks so dynamic.I think some of the lines/perspective for the Gaucho feel a little off. Like around his chest, left arm, and hip. Not entirely sure, but something seems a little bit wonky. Maybe it's his head feeling too small proportionately?Can't decide if I like the left or right facing design more. The composition on both is great. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BVZ Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 Glendale looks wonderful; I think I prefer the latter version which resembles a G. However, I would echo others in that either is head is too small or his arm angle in relation to his body is just slightly off.. Not sure. Great work though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigBuc Posted July 30, 2015 Share Posted July 30, 2015 Can you do Nova Southeastern or Broward College? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 4, 2015 Author Share Posted August 4, 2015 Went ahead & tweaked the Gauchos logo a bit, hopefully this fixes some of the issues. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 4, 2015 Author Share Posted August 4, 2015 https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 4, 2015 Share Posted August 4, 2015 Definitely much better than what they have. Simple, but also includes the totem pole-type head. Really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted August 4, 2015 Share Posted August 4, 2015 This may interest you- UBC actually has one of my favorite visual identities in quidditch! Here's what their logos and jerseys look like: As for your redesign, I love the font especially. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 5, 2015 Author Share Posted August 5, 2015 Hey, that's pretty neat! No idea they had a team for that.^^ Did you do their logo? https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted August 5, 2015 Share Posted August 5, 2015 Hey, that's pretty neat! No idea they had a team for that.^^ Did you do their logo?I didn't, I'm guessing it was done by a student at their school. There are a few talented Canadian quidditch designers! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 5, 2015 Author Share Posted August 5, 2015 Hey, that's pretty neat! No idea they had a team for that.^^ Did you do their logo?I didn't, I'm guessing it was done by a student at their school. There are a few talented Canadian quidditch designers!Have you ever tried contacting any of these schools in regards to their quidditch logo designs and possibly being commisioned by any of them? https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted August 5, 2015 Share Posted August 5, 2015 Hey, that's pretty neat! No idea they had a team for that.^^ Did you do their logo?I didn't, I'm guessing it was done by a student at their school. There are a few talented Canadian quidditch designers!Have you ever tried contacting any of these schools in regards to their quidditch logo designs and possibly being commisioned by any of them?I've been commissioned by other schools! They usually contact me. I recently redid the Utah quidditch program, and I was contacted this weekend by another high-level program. The problem with most quidditch teams is that they don't see the point in paying for design, though that's slowly changing. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 6, 2015 Author Share Posted August 6, 2015 Hey, that's pretty neat! No idea they had a team for that.^^ Did you do their logo?I didn't, I'm guessing it was done by a student at their school. There are a few talented Canadian quidditch designers!Have you ever tried contacting any of these schools in regards to their quidditch logo designs and possibly being commisioned by any of them?I've been commissioned by other schools! They usually contact me. I recently redid the Utah quidditch program, and I was contacted this weekend by another high-level program. The problem with most quidditch teams is that they don't see the point in paying for design, though that's slowly changing.Good to hear your getting paid for your work. Good luck with getting more gigs! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 22, 2015 Author Share Posted August 22, 2015 https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gandalfofhoth Posted August 22, 2015 Share Posted August 22, 2015 Really nice work with the ENMU and Glendale Guachos logo. If you could, I would also love to see a UMaine update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capt. America Posted August 22, 2015 Share Posted August 22, 2015 Well done on the greyhounds! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 23, 2015 Author Share Posted August 23, 2015 Thanks guys! Appreciate the positive feedback for these. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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