khisnen Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 New England Patriots Dribbble Behance Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khisnen Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 What do think guys about these concept Dribbble Behance Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 The Cardinal looks chubby, however these are nice concepts. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 I really like the pats one, except make the collars all one color and the cuff match the jersey color. The red is just too bright and vibrant when compared to the rest of the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 These are some very nice renderings, however I do have a couple nitpicks:1. On the Ravens logo you kept the one thing that throws me off on their package and that is the B in the bird head. When mirrored on the helmets and uniforms the B comes out looking weird and forced. I would like to see your version of the mirrored raven head, cause I bet it looks just as worse.2. Again on the Ravens the back numbers look way too big. Try putting 55 cleanly on there with the size they are now. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RonDesign Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 Wow. Nice ideas all across the board.Patriots: I love how you added some of the old "Pat the Patriot" sneer to the current "Flying Elvis" mark.Ravens; They need to switch to this logo TODAY. Stellar.Only critique I have on that set is the uni number seems somewhat off-type, losing some edge. Font should probably keep some sharp edges.Cardinals: I saw the note above and agree somewhat about the chubbiness of the logo, but I kind of like it. I feel it has more personality than the current mark.Do you have plans to extend these concepts to other teams? Would love to see them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 The critiques so far are pretty accurate, especially the Ravens numbers.As for the Cardinals, I don't think it looks too chubby. The part that throws me is the eye. I think it's that the eye isn't looking where I would expect it to. Seems like the cardinal has "ceiling eyes" -- where no matter what they're looking at, it seems like they're looking at the ceiling. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 The Raven and Cardinal eyes need some work as they look drugged. I'm impressed with all of these concepts, are there alternates? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 The Cardinal looks like he's been in the sun too long. Looks stressed...or was just in a fight and his feathers are in disarray,Elvis is an improvement though.The numbers are WAY too large on the Ravens and the Cards, and too thick on the Ravens as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 Your birds' eyes are really big. It's making them looks too cartoony and not very NFL. Love the Patriots though. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 These are all pretty well done. Execution is key in my eyes, and you did a great job there. I really like the Elvis logo. The Ravens and Cards logos are a bit odd though. And the Ravens number font is just bad. But all-in-all, well done! "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khisnen Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 thanks for the feedback guys i'm going to make the modification Dribbble Behance Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSRebel22 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 I like it they are nice tweaks of the originals Fins Up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khisnen Posted June 24, 2014 Author Share Posted June 24, 2014 i made the change to the cardinals head and change the color also from the previous image. Dribbble Behance Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 I like all 3, but try to make the logos more intimidating and scary-looking. Very good job though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 I dont get the thick black collar for the cards. Black is nowhere else in the uniforms at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowTheMyth Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 Uniform font for Baltimore doesn't really work, try for a font similar to what they have now, I like the rest though, especially the new logo.New England looks nice, especially with the side stripes of their real set gone in this concept.Arizona has been longing for a simplified look, and you nailed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 Just noticed that the zero in your Cardinals number set looks thinner than the ogher numbers Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khisnen Posted June 24, 2014 Author Share Posted June 24, 2014 Just noticed that the zero in your Cardinals number set looks thinner than the ogher numbersi fixed it Dribbble Behance Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 Ravens have large beaks. This looks like a finch. Look at photos of ravens to get a feel for their anatomy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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