DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 Had lots of problems with this entry, everything from designers block to file crashes. Overall not too impressed with my finished product, so I am asking for some C&C on how to improve these kits! Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 This is the main thing that is bugging me about the crest. What I do really like is the crest shape which is a nice change from the current. The font seems a bit generic to me, though I do rather like the overall design of both kits. Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 This is the main thing that is bugging me about the crest. What I do really like is the crest shape which is a nice change from the current. The font seems a bit generic to me, though I do rather like the overall design of both kits.Thanks Matt!Don't really know how I missed that...kinda a big mistake to just flat out miss, but now that you pointed it out I can't un-see how off center the stripes looks now. The font is very generic, pretty much what they use now. I probably should've put more time into that aspect and made it more ancient greek-esque. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 I think Greece looks much better with collars, just my opinion though. LOVE the clash, the flag pattern is very nice. As for the main kit, I'd keep it clean like their current ones. Definitely agree on the font. Another thing I don't like is the template. Personally the guy looks too unrealistic and I'd rather just have him not be there. The presentation is nice and clean but again, I don't think the guy wearing the uni should be there. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 I think Greece looks much better with collars, just my opinion though. LOVE the clash, the flag pattern is very nice. As for the main kit, I'd keep it clean like their current ones. Definitely agree on the font. Another thing I don't like is the template. Personally the guy looks too unrealistic and I'd rather just have him not be there. The presentation is nice and clean but again, I don't think the guy wearing the uni should be there.It's not meant to be a real player, more like a mannequin. But I'll agree not really happy with how the template looks either. Don't really know what to change on it tho.... Might just scrap it and go back to using my flat templates again.Can you elaborate on what's making it look 'unrealistic' perhaps? It's the same template that took second in the euro cup contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 Oh, wow, it's nice to see this larger and in more detail. I was completely oblivious to the pattern you used throughout. I was already a big fan of the kits, and that is such a great detail.The shape of the crest is an upgrade, yes, but I would have liked to see a little more. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 you want to know what was wrong with your design? the 20 point deduction haha, you really can't do anything too fancy for Greece, what you came up with was a good choice. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 Can you elaborate on what's making it look 'unrealistic' perhaps? It's the same template that took second in the euro cup contest.Hmm...it's sort of one of those things where my answer is "it just does". But I think the shading is a bit unrealistic and could use some work. I don't like how it is so blocky, it should be on the whole jersey, just getting more severe towards the end. Also try giving him a face and playing with the shape of it, it looks a bit round at the moment. One little nitpick is when you look at the back of the cleats at first, it looks a bit like they're sticking out but idk, maybe it's just me. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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