Concept Logo For My Daughters High School (Another Update)

[hugevolsfan]

Here is a quick change to the eyes made them slightly bigger & made the brow a little bigger & made them a little sharper this time on a background with outlines.

[ThePeam]

You may have just nailed it with the grey stroke.

[MojoRoberts]

I think connecting the eyebrows with the snout area and creating a meaner looking brow would be good. The eyes seem like they should be bigger too. I like the progression, keep it going.

[hugevolsfan]

Ok here is an update which is my favorite by far I think it takes away any sleepy or whatever look away.

C & C!

[Critical Thinker]

I'd like to see what it looks like with the grey outline about 1/3 thinner. But if you're tired of doing updates, this would be a great final product.

[Christian Legault]

Nice job on the logo, much improved.

[LogoMark]

Wow this is starting to look really nice! That eyebrow update is great!

[hugevolsfan]

Thanks for all the comments I think I may be finished does anyone else think I need to reduce the gray outline.

I am doing wordmarks & numbers (eventually). I will release a full package on a complete identity soon if no more updates needed let me know.

[mbannon92]

The progression here has been really good. Your last version is by far the best--the brow looks really good. And I do think the gray outline needs to be reduced--I'd say to the size of the blue outline around the horns.

[suplauren]

Ok here is an update which is my favorite by far I think it takes away any sleepy or whatever look away.

C & C!

GREAT progress! The M on the forehead is noticeable but doesn't look forced. The eyes look determined and fierce. Horns look proportionate. I do agree that a thinner outline would help. Great job though, I'm sure your daughter's school would love to have this as the logo.

[hugevolsfan]

All right here is the Final Version of the Logo reduced the gray out line & also here is the direction I am going on the wordmark it is nowhere near a finished product right now but just an idea. C & C as always.

[hugevolsfan]

Just wanted to bump this to see if any more C & C is needed since i changed the outline & any comments on the wordmark.

[TShaw528]

I like the thinner outline. Wordmark is fine, nothing special but it's not bad

[jaha32]

This has come a long way since you started. The eyes and brow are much improved. For the word mark, it's a good start but you could manually rework the spacing between some letters. Even if the letters are technically the same distance apart, when you have serifs, it can throw off the appearance. Right now the E and R, and C and K seem very close because the E and C have no right side horizontal serif. Other than that, nice updates.

[hugevolsfan]

Thanks Jaha I have already fixed those things on the letters this was a real rough draft I had shown here. I am probably going to release the full package sometime this week.

Thanks for everyone's help on making this logo really top notch however I am not sure the school is looking to or has the money to change all of the branding they already have but we will see.