T-ROY Posted August 11, 2014 Share Posted August 11, 2014 I would fit in the gold between the stripes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 I'm going to shut up since I really want this, but I'm sure you do to. Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 Stellar work. I'm even trying to be nitpicky this time ... I got nothing. Well done. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nddurst Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Wow...nice work! I was thinking about entering this contest as well, but I see I'll have some stiff competition.My only thoughts:1) On the jersey, the blue numbers get kind of lost in the color...did you try white as the fill color? EDIT: Nevermind, I looked at the full-size image and I think the numbers are okay.2) For the secondary logo, I would flip Griffins so that it's not upside-down, and also maybe try something more GR-specific within the roundel. Michigan is pretty general. Maybe try the skyline next to a river and a bridge? Or maybe Gerald Ford's face? (That's a joke.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quackcom Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 Nice evolution, the piece looks great.I would suggest playing around with the feathers on the back of the head. My first impression was it looked like a face, the big top feather a nose, the bottom two a mouth. The red eye works with this as well. It's less prominent now that you have reworked the beak.Anyone else see this or am I losing it??Also I would remove the wing highlight on the one behind the head to set the head/beak off more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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