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  1. On 05/08/2016 at 0:05 AM, Aggie12 said:

     

    thanks for the feedback, @OSB the fact is that a lot of teams have white kits as away kits, I realize every team on the second page has a white away kit, but they all have traditionally had white in some form of their away kit. For Everton, really you could easily swap the third and away kits, and the away kit I designed only has a white top, but if you look at the first page, only chelsea has a white kit, I think its just the fact of seeing them clustered together on the same page is what makes it more noticeable. Its not like I'm going out of my way to give them a white kit, the clubs just tend to have white kits. I hope you understand.

    I can understand if it's just an unfortunate bunching of all the white away kits haha. Tbh I'd say for Everton (team I support) you've put the away and third the right way round. 

     

    Liverpool - home kit is sound, third kit seems good too. Like the idea of incorporating the Shankly gates into the away but I don't think it sits right. It interferes too much with the badge and manufacturer logo. Having said that I'm not sure what can be done about it, perhaps moving the gate motif further down the shirt, along with the sponsor


  2. Palace - Really like the separation of colours on left and right of shorts and socks on away kit

    Everton - Nice home kit similar to this year's, away kit is very 90s with sublimated pattern, not sure about the hooped effect on the third kit

    Hull - Solid home and away, but third kit I really am fond of. Unusual colour combination but works dead well

    Leicester - Big fan of the collar, nice home and away, great throwback with the third but might look better with black shorts (although not historically accurate)

    Would be nice to see some teams with an away shirt other than white... just my two cents


  3. 9 hours ago, Aggie12 said:

    @OSB and @Jaffa, I believe I'm correct in saying that y'all think Palace and Bournemouth would clash at a game at Crystal Palace, because Palace would be wearing a mainly blue kit? to be fair if they did wear a kit that was mainly blue with red stripes then Bournemouth could wear an all red kit or a home kit that had white shorts,. The way I have it if they played at Palace, then Palace would wear their home kit and Bournemouth would be wearing the away kit I designed for them. Can y'all guess at what the Palace kits might be?

    Either you've gone for a majority red Crystal Palace kit with smaller blue stripes, or you've gone retro and done an all white kit with red/blue sash


  4. What a pleasant surprise about Everton :) that home kit is brilliant and love how you can interchange it with the away. I also like how you went for a radical untraditional design for the third but I do agree with Aggie, the Chang logo should be centred and numbers/ sponsor colour in white. Judging by the map, I predict the three remaining teams could be a selection of: Leeds, Forest, Sunderland, Swansea, or perhaps a Bristol team (City)

     

    P.S. Really liking the tower motif on the socks, but id place them on the front where the intro logo currently is


  5. Nice kit designs for Warrington, buuuuut from a kit clash point of view a tad problematic. You got a home kit of blue and yellow (rightly so) but going with blue away clashes with the other two blue teams in the league, Leeds and Wakefield. For Wakefield I guess the playoff jersey could be worn no issues but for Rhinos (blue and amber) I think the playoff jersey would clash too much too. Just my two cents... keep up the good work really liking this series!


  6. Saints Home kit is really good, liking the throwback too. I'm not feeling the away kit though, the Pilkington's logo should be 100% in white, and the chest band doesn't sit right, the crest isn't centred. I'd consider either reworking the band so that it's thinner or losing it altogether, I think the colour combination of light blue and orange is striking enough to justify a relatively laid back template. Also the new Cas away shirt definitely works better second time round comparing the two. 


  7. Some of the kits you're posting here are great, I really like the fact so much has gone into creating the identity of the regions the clubs come from and that it manifests in the clubs' designs. So far Mt Lee Utd has been my favourite home kit for the pinstripes and colour combo, but City SC of Rattick has the best overall set of kits in my opinion, even if they're not the most extravagant. I also like the fact the clubs take more to the European convention of naming rather than the likes of NFL, MLB etc., makes it feel more authentic to me. Keep it up! Would love to see a royal blue team in this series

    The thing I like about my fictional country is that I've been slowly developing its identity ever since I was in elementary school (I'm a high school junior now), with these concepts putting the final polishing on these regional identities. I've always liked Mt. Lee's colors as well as Rattick's kits, so I can't disagree with you there! Also, my decision to use mostly European names at first (I've been slowly changing names here and there) is because 1) I won't have to worry about too much naming, just naming the cities is all, and 2) it kinda helps add realism to this league.

    Glad you liked this series so far and I'll be sure to incorporate a royal blue team in here somehow. (Got any sponsorship name ideas, perhaps?)

    Nice one, glad to know I'm not the only one with a fantasy country!

    For sponsorship, assuming there isn't a ban on alcohol(?) I'll put forward "Fohlenblut Lager"


  8. Some of the kits you're posting here are great, I really like the fact so much has gone into creating the identity of the regions the clubs come from and that it manifests in the clubs' designs. So far Mt Lee Utd has been my favourite home kit for the pinstripes and colour combo, but City SC of Rattick has the best overall set of kits in my opinion, even if they're not the most extravagant. I also like the fact the clubs take more to the European convention of naming rather than the likes of NFL, MLB etc., makes it feel more authentic to me. Keep it up! Would love to see a royal blue team in this series