This is one hell of a concept (or shall I say heaven). But IMO, the flag must be attached to a pole w/ a rounded end and not on a pointed weapon itself. Maybe just shape the tip to a circle and it would be fine.
I agree with this. When I saw the logos first, it ran into my mind that the AS10 jersey may have that spotlight illusion. Great work on the first one. But I find the second try a bit busy because of that 4 stripes.