Richmond Rattlers Concept

[URhockey]

This is my first attempt at designing a logo. This is for my sons inline hockey team the Richmond Rattlers. I would really appreciate feedback on this concept.

http://www.xcelhockey.com/rattlers.htm

Thank-you,

URHockey

[Brave-Bird 08]

the first thing I thought was either a frog or a crab.

[leggman01]

This is my first attempt at designing a logo. This is for my sons inline hockey team the Richmond Rattlers. I would really appreciate feedback on this concept.

http://www.xcelhockey.com/rattlers.htm

Thank-you,

URHockey

i saw them play at dreamsports in apex, nc a few weeks ago and thought...man, that team could use a good logo set

not sure this fits the bill...i think the rattler needs a bottom jaw, the eyes need some work and there should be a rattle somewhere - i'd also make the teeth white and lose the white space in the center...