Luke13T Posted September 30, 2016 Share Posted September 30, 2016 I am trying to learn Illustrator so I did a Tennessee Titans concept. This is nowhere near good IMO so I would really appreciate some suggestions and constructive critiscme Titans.svg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted September 30, 2016 Share Posted September 30, 2016 narrowing the part of the blade closest to the handle to meet its width would help and outline(s) here would do a world of good. This is a solid start, you'll get there But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke13T Posted September 30, 2016 Author Share Posted September 30, 2016 So something like this: Titans.svg *Reshaped sword *Added navy out line around handle *Added red outline around blade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted October 1, 2016 Share Posted October 1, 2016 I was thinking more of a thicker outline around the whole sword to add a little pop and reshaping the sword to the handle more like this where it thins dramatically at the end But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke13T Posted October 1, 2016 Author Share Posted October 1, 2016 Thank you for your suggestion but I'm going to focus on my fictional college on the SCAA thread because it will be more fun to work on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted October 1, 2016 Share Posted October 1, 2016 Hey, no hard feelings, I'm right there with you! I have a feeling that thread will consume my life for the next month or two. Cheers But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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