My High School Hockey Concept

[Dan12020]

Alright guys, I am one of the coaches at my former high school, and I have had this concept on paper for about a year, but I haven't been able to translate it onto a computer until recently. The other yellowjacket script is just another idea, and I wanted to see which one you guys thought looked better, and the logo is our high school's current ice hockey logo. I just couldn't find an outline that looked good around the letters and numbers on the black jersey though. C & C welcome and appreciated as always. Let me know what you think.