leggman01 Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 first off, i hope i'm posting this in the right forum...if it belongs in the concepts forum, feel free to move it and accept my apologiesa friend is in an mba program and has to present a business plan for a start-up company - she wants to incorporate a logo into her presentation, and asked me to design the logo - i wish i could take credit for the name and slogan...i think they're brilliant (although another friend said he'd open a bar across the street and call it "home plate...why stop at third when you can score?" )anyway, here is my first stab at the logo after finishing this up, my initial thought is that i need to increase the size of the "third base" wordmark to make it more prominant and reduce the size of the ball/banner/slogankeep in mind i work in paint shop pro, and text on curves is VERY difficult to do, so please try not to be too harsh on my wordmark and slogan textc&c appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 first off, i hope i'm posting this in the right forum...if it belongs in the concepts forum, feel free to move it and accept my apologiesa friend is in an mba program and has to present a business plan for a start-up company - she wants to incorporate a logo into her presentation, and asked me to design the logo - i wish i could take credit for the name and slogan...i think they're brilliant (although another friend said he'd open a bar across the street and call it "home plate...why stop at third when you can score?" )anyway, here is my first stab at the logo after finishing this up, my initial thought is that i need to increase the size of the "third base" wordmark to make it more prominant and reduce the size of the ball/banner/slogankeep in mind i work in paint shop pro, and text on curves is VERY difficult to do, so please try not to be too harsh on my wordmark and slogan textc&c appreciated Well, it is sports related in some sort. Looks good tough. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 The Third Base writing should be a lot bigger. It should be the main focus of the design, not the slogan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 i'm pretty happy with the way this turned out....here's the primary logoi also prepared some merchandise for her presentation (thanks to skye dillon for the templates)ringer tee'shoodieshats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Solid work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 I really really like that. Very well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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