JimmyKnight Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 (Note: The away jersey's front chest is grey, I don't know what the heck I was doing but it's suppose to be white.)This is my first concept ever, and I just want some advice and comments. Thanks guys!~J.K. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Clean up those lines a bit (actually a lot), make the crest smaller on all three jerseys, and you've got a decent concept. Also, make the image a little smaller; right now it takes up the whole screen and some, so... Also, I'm not such a fan of the basic Reebok templates. Try branching out a little and doing something more...creative, I guess. You aren't going to get a lot of C&C on something that isn't unique. The basic idea of the logo is nice, but it looks sloppy. Clean up the shape, make it more smooth and have the D fit in with the hatchet more. Maybe some sort of unique font? I dunno. Anyways, this is a good place to start...speaking of which, where is Danville? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 I'm not going to post any C&C because, well everything that has been said about EDGE Templates, has been said. Like logocruncher mentioned, stray away from the EDGE template and make your own cuts/designs, it will help a lot.Also, change the background, it isn't helping present your concept at all, it's actually detracting from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JimmyKnight Posted April 3, 2009 Author Share Posted April 3, 2009 Hey thanks guys I really appreciate the concepts.Btw logocruncher Danville is in Illinois it's the county seat of Vermilion County which is roughly 160 Miles south of Chicago. We've a couple of Junior Hockey teams, Danville Fighting Saints, The Prancers, The Danville Wings (most successful) and right now we have the Danville Inferno of the Great Lakes Junior Hockey League. Don't really know how long we'll have them though...Again, thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Something is bugging me about the arc shape on the logo. Perhaps if you turn the tomahawk the other way (facing outward), it would make more sense that the arc follows the motion of the tomahawk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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