Minnesota Twinkies Concept

[SpotDog]

So I redesigned the Twins and tried to make red the primary colour.

Logo Sheet: Not much changed here just a few outlines changed and I darkened the red.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj406/s...g2009/Twin3.png

Primary Home: I simplified it and tried to give it a classic look, took away the pinstripes.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj406/s...og2009/Twin.png

Primary Road: Not too much changed other than piping and loss of pinstripes.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj406/s...g2009/Twin1.png

Alternate: Completely new addition with a red jersey.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj406/s...g2009/Twin2.png

I would like some C&C please.

[1HabsFan9]

i like the twins jerseys as they are now, with the pinstripes.

your road one looks too much like the red sox roads before this season. the alternate red isn't bad though.

[HotCoffey]

logos: i think that all of the twins logos are pretty unique to the franchise and it would be dumb to change them. By keeping the logos primarily the way they are, you keep the overall design traditional and simplified, two elements of a solid concept. One thing you could work on is a slight revision of the TC logo; while iconic, an angle change here or there would be just fine and refresh the logo.

home jersey: i like it. you are obviously attempting to filter out most of the navy and bring out the red. even though almost half the teams use red and navy, the look of a logo on one side of the chest would make the look uniquely Twins. solid job.

road jersey: pinstripes do not belong on gray jerseys. smart by taking them out.

alternate: very interesting. navy is the primary color right now, you took a risk by taking it out and adding a red alt. The wordmark Twins across the chest is excellent. Great call with the colors. This is much better than the Red Sox red alt. If the Twins were to design a red alt, this is where they should start.

Excellent job. Since I commented yours, could you please comment mine? my concept is "revised KC alt logo." it should be near the top of the board. I'm really not asking you to vote, (there is a poll), I'd really like to hear your comments. I need more than one person's advice when I go back to revise it. Thanks!

[SpotDog]

Excellent job. Since I commented yours, could you please comment mine? my concept is "revised KC alt logo." it should be near the top of the board. I'm really not asking you to vote, (there is a poll), I'd really like to hear your comments. I need more than one person's advice when I go back to revise it. Thanks!

Done

[BJBerthiaume]

You did a pretty good job with this. I just have a couple suggestions:

1) The Twins have a very good script, so that should probably be used on the primary home.

2) The primary home is still pretty good looking, but would work better as an alternate.

3) Considering that red is the primary color, you did a pretty good job with the road and alternate.

[NinthAfterNen]

This may just be me, but I think the TC logo should be on the away jerseys as opposed to the Minnesota script. The Minnesota script has never been anything special, and I like the Twins current home script so I'd like to see it kept in constant use.