FGWB Posted April 22, 2011 Share Posted April 22, 2011 I went to a portfolio review for current students in graphic design programs. I was asked by one of the professional designers if I had my own logo and I said I didn't, and I've also seen many members around here do the same.Like most personal logos, I'm trying to combine my initials of G and W. Living in Buffalo, NY most of the architecture and design styles, especially downtown, is art deco. And me personally, I am very traditional minded and feel I should have lived in a past generation rather than the current. So I tried using art deco inspired letters as my logo and these were my first attempts.So I tried, and would like some feedback from some fresh eyes.I personally prefer the first version with the W further right, but I tried both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted April 22, 2011 Share Posted April 22, 2011 The second one is best. The first is too wide and all that negative space takes the energy away from its intial impact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted April 22, 2011 Author Share Posted April 22, 2011 Thanks. I just feel like the first one reads as GW easier. I wanna try to add more depth and make it pop more, but right now I'm trying to find a starting point to build on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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