pats2000 Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 Hey guys, this is the first concept im posting to the board. Hope you guys like it, and i would like to get cc. This is a Jacsonville Jaguars concept that is a fusion of two concepts i was working on.http://www.flickr.com/photos/brent3419/8412770872/in/photostream Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pats2000 Posted January 25, 2013 Author Share Posted January 25, 2013 heres the teal version of the uniform with an alternate helmet http://www.flickr.com/photos/brent3419/8412994092/in/photostream Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 And as any first concept would, this needs a lot of work. First thing I noticed is the inconsistency and misdirection of your sets from top to bottom. The striping schemes I automatically register as random icicles plastered onto the side panels, possibly the least visible areas of a football jersey. You didn't bother to do anything with the pants, and the alt helmet, while not allowed in the NFL, also accomplishes nothing but to hide the primary logo. Not sure why you would want your logo not to be visible from a marketing stanpoint. Personally I don't see anything here that really pushes the brand. I'm sure your goal is to improve your work on these boards, so my advice to you is simple. Never throw things together and call it a day, but rather make time and effort to present a piece you believe really reflects what a team is all about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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