jeh-see Posted January 24, 2014 Share Posted January 24, 2014 A new concept, based in Australia (Brisbane), nicknamed the "Rogues." The concept idea was a "rogue shark". The following are sketch one and two, I may do a third, just to clean up the shark head (which I am happy with but could still tweak a few parts) and give more attention to the surfboard. Lemme know what you think, please.Sketch 1Sketch 2Thanks, guys!UniJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 Great! the second one isn't finished though, is it? half shark is missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeh-see Posted January 25, 2014 Author Share Posted January 25, 2014 Great! the second one isn't finished though, is it? half shark is missing.Well the left side of the head will be mirrored when I vectorize the drawing, but the shark's head was all I was going for on this logo, so no, no more of the actual fish will be added to the final concept. Thanks for the kind words, too.UniJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 Looks too much like the LA Riptide for me, surfboard and all. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeh-see Posted January 25, 2014 Author Share Posted January 25, 2014 Hmmmmm. It looks like I may have to change the point of attack of my Rogue. Though I think there is enough of a difference between my logo and that one to suffice as original, especially for a fantasy concept.UniJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 I think changing the angle would be good. Another thing I noticed is that your current sketch has some wonky anatomy: the eyes as you have them are really far down the shark's head. Here's a ref of a shark in the same pose as your sketch. No eyes visible.I think if you changed the angle of the shark you could get around this problem and it looking so similar to the Riptide. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted January 25, 2014 Share Posted January 25, 2014 Great whites never seem to be photographed in a "cuddly" pose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeh-see Posted January 25, 2014 Author Share Posted January 25, 2014 I think changing the angle would be good. Another thing I noticed is that your current sketch has some wonky anatomy: the eyes as you have them are really far down the shark's head. Here's a ref of a shark in the same pose as your sketch. No eyes visible.I think if you changed the angle of the shark you could get around this problem and it looking so similar to the Riptide.I see what you're saying, I honestly do, but it's all a matter of perspective. Case in point...But I plan on tweaking it, somehow getting the same vibe I did with the surfboard without using a surfboard, it'll just take some creative thinking on my part. Thanks guys.UniJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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