BlackBolt3 Posted April 24, 2017 Share Posted April 24, 2017 Yeah, I feel like the Dash's identity is already dated, no I didn't realize how ugly warthogs actually are. Y'all really don't read this stuff, so look at the concept and tell me what I did wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Yellow Flag Posted April 24, 2017 Share Posted April 24, 2017 The Dash's identity is dated, probably because it was so poorly conceived (the team never had a shot, named after punctuation), but your logo isn't quite ugly enough to be a proper warthog (yeah, I read the things). I think it's good, but I think it's missing some minor league charm. Right now, it looks more like a soccer crest. As it stands, I think it needs a little bit more whimsical character, and it needs to be either heavily simplified or it needs an alternate mark that would look nice on a baseball cap (a WS would work). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted April 26, 2017 Share Posted April 26, 2017 Maybe add a snarl to one side of that mouth and make him a little grumpier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted April 29, 2017 Share Posted April 29, 2017 You're off to a great start. I like the subtle W in the brow. One suggestion: in the primary, if you added the impression of shoulders within the red home plate area, it could make the warthog appear more imposing. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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