Sidney

Here is the new version 

42 minutes ago, darkpiranha said:

You could also try making his hair green, to match the green helmet he was wearing in the original, then you could have a green goatee that would stand out just a bit easier.   I think also, because you have write streaks/highlights in his hair that you could use white highlights to form a goatee.   I agree that a goatee would be a nice continuity, but as it is right now, you can kinda imagine a goatee in there if you really want to.

16 hours ago, kb105 said:

For the Siena logo, my only suggestion is to not use black in the wordmark. I think that the green, yellow, and white is a better combination. For the Mississippi Valley State logos, my only suggestion would be to try to give the new devil the goatee the old devil has, just for a little bit of continuity between the old and new. Other than that, you have some more really good logos.

Ok here is the the updated version with the goatee & green hair.  plus there is one with and without a cape. And about that posture what you think? I've tried something different as you guys can see...

In my final version I'll also make the devil's fork in red.... instead of yellow

9 hours ago, kb105 said:

For the Siena logo, my only suggestion is to not use black in the wordmark. I think that the green, yellow, and white is a better combination. For the Mississippi Valley State logos, my only suggestion would be to try to give the new devil the goatee the old devil has, just for a little bit of continuity between the old and new. Other than that, you have some more really good logos.

I  think the goatee will make kind of a black mass son the face as I play a lot with shadows etc...but I'll try to come up with something  

Here is an other version of Mississippi Valley State Delta Devils with the upper body C&C are appreciated 

Here is the final version of the Siena Saints, I've put the name in green instead of white... what you. guys think?

I don't know why but these days I've been so inspired about athletic logos ^^ here the Mississippi Valley State Delta Devils C&C are appreciated

43 minutes ago, kb105 said:

I would say so, I can definitely tell what breed of dog it is.

Hope so!! it took me 3 hours to draw the mouth area ^^ I had to watch St bernard pics for like 30 mins straight to understand this area....  Take a look of the first version I had before posting here.

11 hours ago, kb105 said:

I’d say both are really good, it really depends on what you want the demeanor of the dog to be. The one on the left seems more confident and almost cocky, whereas the one on the right is the more traditional angry, snarling look. I think the expression on the left is more unique in today’s logos, so that’s the one I would probably go with.

Yeah I can see the cocky look on his face. The St BErnard face is particular do you think I caught the global shape?

I had a Siena Saint logo I was working on few weeks ago, I wasn't really happy about the mouth area of my St Bernard, so I get back to the drawing process and came up with that what you guys think? C&C are appreciate. 

My final version of the Wake forest Demon Deacons C&C are appreciated

Here is the alter ego, can't really make any horns because of the hat. C&C are appreciated

9 hours ago, heavybass said:

Have you considered making the deacon an actual demon?

You mean an alter ego? that could be a logo used for special game as rivalries.... 

59 minutes ago, Brave-Bird 08 said:

That is an incredible beaver logo. You have talent. 

Thanks I really appreciate! 

Ok here is a little correction, I've done it more compact example no space between chin & bow tie... C&C are appreciated! 

I've red an article about the Wake forest additional logos and ppl weren't really happy about it, and then I remember I had a thread about WF back in 2013  So I've decided to get back at it for the seconde time (left 2013) ....  and wooow... what you guys think? 

Here is the correct version

7 hours ago, Section30 said:

Missing the D in Bemidji, but otherwise I dig it

WOOOOW I was so into it that I didn't saw it

1 hour ago, Section30 said:

 

Haha, I've tried

 

For the text I think it's mainly the gnawed wood, I don't think it really adds anything and would be hard to reproduce on small things

OK I'll post a version with a classic font .

9 hours ago, Section30 said:

 

As someone who goes to BSU, I would not be mad at all if they went with that logo on the right. I'm not a big fan of the BSU text though

Thanks man!! You got to convince them to change.... looool, tell me what you'd change on the font it is too generic, the gnawed wood? Once you tell me I'll make modifications. 

Here is an update with different eyes... Which one work better??

Hi there, Here is a try at designing a beaver, I've done some researches and didn't see any school athletic department using front view. So I've decide to give it a try! What you guys think?

Final version! C&C are appreciated 

-Change the ears

-Improved the mouth, by taking off the lip

I was obsessed with the ears.. wasn't sure so I got back to drawing them I think it's a lot better what you guys think? C&C are appreciated.

1 hour ago, jaytavo305 said:

I really like the top 2. I think the darker brown version looks better but I'm not sure if that really reflects the school colors, so I'm torn on which to go with

I understand you....

35 minutes ago, kb105 said:

For Wofford, I wonder how the terrier would look if you put the tan/gold where the white is on the face. Other than that suggestion, both sets of logos look good

Here it is, what you think?