Clemdawg Posted August 26, 2014 Share Posted August 26, 2014 Okay, this is my attempt at a Sourdough Sam logo. I need help with the hat. Any thoughts or help would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted August 26, 2014 Share Posted August 26, 2014 The perspective of the top of the hat is off, you shouldn't be able see the top of the hat and the hat is more oval than circular Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varsity Blue Posted August 26, 2014 Share Posted August 26, 2014 Sourdough needs another eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clemdawg Posted August 26, 2014 Author Share Posted August 26, 2014 I agree with the top of the hat. Does the overall perspective of the hat look right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 26, 2014 Share Posted August 26, 2014 Compared to the one in the picture yours is too small for his head. Also agree it needs his other eye unless your planning on shading in that whole side of his face. The nose running all the way up is also odd but again gives the indication your going to shade in that left side. Another issue I see is his beard gets kinda thin around the jaw area making him look really thin. Try drawing him a little more like the picture then you can work on the shadows/highlights later once you have the face down. Hope to see this progress! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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