Veras Posted August 22, 2015 Share Posted August 22, 2015 I like it, especially the angle of the cheekbones, but I have two critiques. First, the line forming the bottom of the banana extends past the edge of the skull, which looks sloppy. Second, I'm not so sure about the teeth. The gold ones stand out too much. I'm not sure if it's because they have shading and none of the other teeth do, or because the gold is too bright and it needs to be made a bit more subtle, but they don't look like they're attached to the rest of the logo. History of a Fictional Football League (1989) Thread - Logos - Uniforms - History Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 22, 2015 Author Share Posted August 22, 2015 And Knightsquare... because work screwed my day YET AGAIN. I like it, especially the angle of the cheekbones, but I have two critiques. First, the line forming the bottom of the banana extends past the edge of the skull, which looks sloppy. Second, I'm not so sure about the teeth. The gold ones stand out too much. I'm not sure if it's because they have shading and none of the other teeth do, or because the gold is too bright and it needs to be made a bit more subtle, but they don't look like they're attached to the rest of the logo.I wasn't sure about the shading part... should I go with solid darker color or lighter? I can also outline them in black, but I think that would make that worse for standing out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veras Posted August 22, 2015 Share Posted August 22, 2015 I would think that you should shade all of the teeth rather than removing the shading from the gold ones. I also suspect that it would look better as a soft curved line starting at the top left and going down and to the right. The logo has a lot of curvy lines in it, but the teeth and the shadows there are all straight. History of a Fictional Football League (1989) Thread - Logos - Uniforms - History Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 22, 2015 Author Share Posted August 22, 2015 Okay... I like the straight teeth... and I really don't want to round the bottoms (there's a reason for that, it's got a lot to do with the way I draw these things digitally). Here's the "not extended" line and the teeth shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veras Posted August 22, 2015 Share Posted August 22, 2015 I was talking about rounding the shadows, not the teeth themselves, but this definitely works. The whole logo fits together now, in my opinion. History of a Fictional Football League (1989) Thread - Logos - Uniforms - History Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 22, 2015 Author Share Posted August 22, 2015 I've got a problem. Nothing I do for Shamrock Celtic works well... I've got the original and the new one below:I can't draw a decent shamrock/clover... and I certainly can't digitally draw a Celtic knot... so should I move on and use one of these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 23, 2015 Author Share Posted August 23, 2015 Shamrock Celtic is decidedly going to be the cross with the leaves and the circle. I'm also leaving Wordsmiths due to the fact that I can't think of anything better than that. Now, I present to you, the first logo for Vulcan FC... and hopefully THE logo, because I like the way this turned out. I may end up doing some gradient rather than the sharp lines for the background but I wanted to see how the sharp lines turned out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 24, 2015 Author Share Posted August 24, 2015 This might be the last one for today... I was feeling inspired but wanted this one to be simple. This is the one I think that I'm the happiest with (today).Shazam CM: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 25, 2015 Author Share Posted August 25, 2015 I made this in red... though I'm toying with changing it to a drab looking blue... pictures to come shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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EmeraldSpecter Posted August 25, 2015 Author Share Posted August 25, 2015 The final logo of the original twelve... Real Olympia. I was going to go with muscle arms but that looked way too cheezy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmeraldSpecter Posted August 25, 2015 Author Share Posted August 25, 2015 The whole league... I changed the Knightsquare colors because they were identical to the Vulcan FC colors... oops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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