Sheen_styler Posted December 14, 2015 Share Posted December 14, 2015 Hello Everyone!First of all I want to thank you all for being a great inspiration and a great source of material and ideas. Let's start with the credits (I hope I'm not breaking any rule with these)• The jersey template is from BucksFan from this forum• The helmet template is from the great Davidson• I largely used the fonts by Conrad• You'll notice i suck at creating logos, so every logos take inspiration from images taken from the web and modified or retraced in IllustratorI tried to create some complete branding for the teams in my fantasy football league, and i'd love to have some advice and critics from you all. The idea was to have some "NFL ready" brands but with a NCAA feel. I do NOT had the possibility to choose team names, so sorry in advance for some "NSFW" puns. And sorry for my english, i'm italian So, let's go with the first two teams:The flying skull logo is a retrace of some image from the web. The helmet has a carbon fiber pattern with a pearl red and orange effect activated with light reflection. Every silver spot has a metallic finish.This second team is strongly inspired by the Dredd's uniforms and the Navy helmets, with golden wings on the shoulders and bright red details. I tried to experiment a bit with TV numbers on the undershirt.If anyone wants to try something with the logos and lend me some help i would be really happy to watch and listen.That's my first post, so tell me if i've done something wrong (i hope not). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skinny39 Posted December 14, 2015 Share Posted December 14, 2015 These are AMAZING. I feel like you've completed your goal of making some NFL ready uniforms with a more NCAA feel... so far. Just keep doing what you're doing with these and you should be fine! The wordmark for the Bandits seems a bit hard to read IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 14, 2015 Share Posted December 14, 2015 Absolutely think the Judges is a great concept.On the other hand the Bandits concept just seems to much to me. Maybe, take the logo off the pants, and take the stripe around the back of the helmet off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 14, 2015 Author Share Posted December 14, 2015 Thanks for the opinions! I know the logo-on-pants is something really not in line with NFL or even NCAA image, you think i can solve the problem making it more subtle?On the other hand, i really like the striping around the helmet, it kinda reminds me the one from Seattle.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 15, 2015 Share Posted December 15, 2015 Maybe just a small logo ontheupper right thigh but, you are doing a good job bringing the ncaa to the nfl without screwing up so... good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skinny39 Posted December 15, 2015 Share Posted December 15, 2015 Are these based on cities in Italy or just made up fantasy teams? I see an "Italia" logo on the back of the helmets so that was my first conclusion lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 15, 2015 Author Share Posted December 15, 2015 These two are from Monza and Vimercate (you can read Monza and Vime in the word marks), that are two town near Milan, where the two owners actually live. But there's no connection between the cities and the selection of logos o color palettes, I just got some indications from the owners and tried to work my way around as best as i could (you will notice later, with the Boyz concept that i'll soon upload, that sometimes the indications were awful XD). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 15, 2015 Author Share Posted December 15, 2015 Ok. I tried a lighter (almost white) outline on the bandits wordmark and i edited the image in the first post. I would like to thank you for the critics but unfortunately the owner of the Bandits absolutely love the pants oversized logo so i cannot change it .Now for the next two concepts, i was totally free on the first one and, as i said before, i was asked to use "Gold" and "Checks" for the second one so.....that's what i came up with...A pretty standard color palette for one of the founders of the league, based in Buccinasco that is a small neighborhood of Milan. There's a strong Japan feel in this uni, and everything here really revolves around the helmet. You can't notice it here, but the striping is really unique, mimicking two trigrams from the I Ching (Wind and Thunder). Actually u can have a hint of that on the pants striping. Again the logo is just a recoloring from the Oakland Raiders rebrand by OspreyDawn.The second concept is for a team based in Como, the famous city on the shores of the Como Lake. I tried to include the checkered pattern in a "Maryland Flag" way, and taking inspiration from there i embodied the incipit from "Promessi Sposi" on the gold background. The two thompsons in the logo were, as you can imagine, requests from the team owner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 15, 2015 Share Posted December 15, 2015 Two great uniforms, maybe for the morning woods take the stripe off the helmet and make it a white facemask And incorparate some more red intheGuys uniform Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 15, 2015 Author Share Posted December 15, 2015 like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted December 15, 2015 Share Posted December 15, 2015 All of these are really cool! Nice work, loving the Judges the most Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 15, 2015 Share Posted December 15, 2015 Perfect that looks awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 15, 2015 Author Share Posted December 15, 2015 Red on the Boyz is a nice add, and i like also the white facemask....but i miss the wooden stripe on the helmet....i must think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 16, 2015 Share Posted December 16, 2015 ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokiefan99 Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 any more concepts coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheen_styler Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 Sure, i'm working out another two but i don't want to submit something incomplete!...in think in a few days i could come up with something ready to post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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