Dilbert Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 Okay so for my senior project I did logo design. My product was to design a logo for my school and my action was to put it on a shirt. Im now pleased to present to you my logo that I designed for the West Clermont Institute of Performing Arts at Glen Este High School. It is now on the WECIPA webpagehttp://www.westcler.org/gh/small_schools/wecipa/C+C please! Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted June 1, 2006 Author Share Posted June 1, 2006 Bueller...Bueller...Bueller... Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted June 1, 2006 Author Share Posted June 1, 2006 Anyone want to comment? Its my first logo so I would really like to know what you guys think. Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 not bad, It kinda looks pixelated. If it were to be vectorized it would be alot more intriguing. My only problem I have is the word mark and how the W and the E sort of overlap. I have the feeling you were trying to make it seem as they were one, my suggestion is to combine the W and E then place the outline around that, so that the white line cuts it off showing the seperation. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 it looks...kind of microsoft word-ishGood idea. Not so great executionClean it up and I'm sure it would look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted June 2, 2006 Author Share Posted June 2, 2006 it looks...kind of microsoft word-ishGood idea. Not so great executionClean it up and I'm sure it would look good. Well it was my first time using Illustrator Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kit Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 There's too much small-level detail in the iconography (which, in itself, looks like clip art).Verdana is a screen font, designed to be used primarily at small point sizes (such as on this website). Look around for some better fonts that are nicely kerned at larger sizes (kerning is the space between letters).As for the larger "W", Look at other schools which use single-letters as insignia. They tend to use collegiate fonts, such as Machine.I'd be inclined to re-proportion the wordmark to the letterform, and ditch the icons altogether. Then play around a bit with nice colours and border effects (plain but striking is the key).Hope that helps a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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