averyj Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 First, you've got a lot of stray marks on the image.The jaw and mouth are open too much for realism. Right now it looks like he's trying to catch a fly in his mouth.His nose is getting lost in the outline, and the whisker areas are lost with such a thin outline.Finally the streaks on the mane don't fit together to make a curved line, right now they're kinda blocky.Anyway, this has a lot of potential, and if you work it out, will make a great logo. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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