Des Moines Rush

[RoughRiders9]

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This is my very very very first C+C ever. Please take it easy

[speedy]

Way, way, way too hard to read, especially once it's sewn onto a jersey. It doesn't really convey "Rush" to me. What are you referring to when you use the name Rush? Try to play that in some more. The "DM" looks a little too busy, try removing the line through the middle of the D. However, I do like the R, keep that if at all possible.

[RoughRiders9]

Way, way, way too hard to read, especially once it's sewn onto a jersey. It doesn't really convey "Rush" to me. What are you referring to when you use the name Rush? Try to play that in some more. The "DM" looks a little too busy, try removing the line through the middle of the D. However, I do like the R, keep that if at all possible.

Thanks for the feedbacks. However, i'm working on a different fake baseball team, with a much better logo. I'm not quite done with that one, but when i'm done, i'll post it here. Thanks though. You guys are teaching me something new.

I was referring Rush to the two rivers in Des Moines that "rushes" through the city. Nice nickname, huh?

[HarperK]

Typing words r fun

[illwauk]

I've been to Des Moines, but what the hell is Dec Mogue?

And I'm not sure I understand how "Rush" ties into Des Moines. Rush as in "Rush hour by Iowa standards?" Rush might be a clever tie-in to Adventure Land, but even that feels like a reach.

EDIT: OK, I see you already answered that. Still feels like a reach, but it could work if excecuted well enough.

Like your color selection though. But not in this arrangement.