camcool21 Posted July 13, 2007 Author Share Posted July 13, 2007 well, kinda decided to go in a totally different direction, what do u guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 13, 2007 Share Posted July 13, 2007 Looks good. The top of the ship (everything above the hull) is too curvy. Destroyers are tough and angular. Menacing. The curves ruin the look I think you want to achieve. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 13, 2007 Author Share Posted July 13, 2007 thx for the advice, here's an updated more "angular" version...still doesn't look tough tho.any ideas on how to make it look tough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rambulance Posted July 13, 2007 Share Posted July 13, 2007 Put a snarling face on the front of it? Make it a cartoony logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 13, 2007 Author Share Posted July 13, 2007 nah, I don't like that idea...I'm trying to incorporate guns currently Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 13, 2007 Share Posted July 13, 2007 When you get the outline to look right, it will look better, but I think it will be substandard at that point. A big part of that is shading and colors. The hull of the ship has highlights and lowlights to give the perception of depth, whereas the deck of the ship is simply black making it look flat at almost a perpendicular angle to the direction of the ship. Small steps first, but I think that will be a big hurdle that well need to be crossed at some point. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 13, 2007 Author Share Posted July 13, 2007 is this a step in the right direction? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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camcool21 Posted July 14, 2007 Author Share Posted July 14, 2007 alright, I have a question...which one of these do u like the best?1:2:3:4:5: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 14, 2007 Share Posted July 14, 2007 Number 3 has the most going for it, in my opinion. I'd adjust the curve of the deck part though. It's not right. You're getting closer though. The mast still looks a little flat, but one step at a time. You're making progress. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 14, 2007 Author Share Posted July 14, 2007 umm...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 15, 2007 Author Share Posted July 15, 2007 ok, I'm satisfied with this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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