elliott Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 Here is some logos I made for Drew22, everything from his suggestions. Comments on making it better?C+C! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 The middle bird really needs some definition, for one. It's also really dark and hard to see. Lighten up the circle maybe? "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted October 11, 2007 Author Share Posted October 11, 2007 Better? Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 For the logos, maybe it's just the sizing, but make the lines thicker.Also, choose a different font. It's pretty hard to read (I don't even know what it says, Albatross?) Get the team name in there (Seagulls?) and make it more legible. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geauxjames Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!I have been preaching to years (to my clients, staff and students) that ifd a logo doesn't work in blackand white, it will never truly work in color.Try doing it in black and white first, this will help push the logo a little more. Also try making the outline come into the logo a bit, because less is more. The inside of these logos have zero definition to them, you need to fix that with the outlines coming inside. "Fat white guys rule the world son" -TS... I should know, I'm one of 'em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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