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Atlanta Braves Hockey concept


ZettaBerg40

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Hmm, it looks good. But:

1) I think the Braves script (or Atlanta script) looks awesome and I think that should be incorporated somewhere, if not on these, then on an alt.

2) You need shoulder patches. Maybe use the Braves or Atlanta script for that?

3) I would recommend outlining the number on back on the white jersey in blue.

4) Maybe you can incorporate a little more yellow somewhere. It might make the uni pop a little.

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Solid concept...

My critiques: The 'A' on the away is far superior to the axe-A thing on the home, (which is a bit too small aswell.) I'd probably try making the plain A a bit bigger too. I like the template of the away much much better, and think you should just make a navy version of this for the home. How about maybe an arched, taller font for the name-on-the-back? Agree with logodude about stroking the number on the white jersey...and maybe try navy instead of red....also, the name on the dark jersey should definitely be white.

Nice work, otherwise.

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Hmm, it looks good. But:

1) I think the Braves script (or Atlanta script) looks awesome and I think that should be incorporated somewhere, if not on these, then on an alt.

2) You need shoulder patches. Maybe use the Braves or Atlanta script for that?

3) I would recommend outlining the number on back on the white jersey in blue.

4) Maybe you can incorporate a little more yellow somewhere. It might make the uni pop a little.

Ditto on suggestion one. I would use the 'A' as a shoulder patch.

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