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www.geocities.com/marksmadness2002/alabamahockey.html

please don't be too harsh

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umm plain..very plain...and it looks crudely done

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Ok, ill try to get some good criticm here since im claiming to be johnny constructive in these other posts:P

The lack of stripes makes it look like a practice jersey. I think the numbers being big on the side is a interesting look. I question why there is no white. Isnt white a large part of ALA's scheme??

Lose the NCAA patch, no teams wear that. I suggest creating an SEC HOCKEY logo, which could maybe inspire a whole SEC HOCKEY collection that would surely give you great amounts of practice.

Keep with it. Everyone starts like this. I know you said you were in Highschool, so you have all the time in the world to get a better program, learn it (see http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?showtopic=7768&st=70 ) for both a link to a free version of Illustrator, and a tutorial (pages 2 and 3, respectively)

On your jersey indiviually. Id take the unique striping from either the football, or basketball jerseys, which ever you find more suitable, and kinda model them after that. or go completely "discrimihater' with them.

If you choose to stay with Paint, which is fine, look at guys like Discrim who does great rendering with paint. Its all about practice, keep with it. Cant wait to see more stuff!

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I like the logo and think it looks very good for a college hockey team, though the numbers on the shoulder llok too biug as does teh SEC logo.

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