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  1. The first impression that i get is that it looks royal. I like that about it, and the silhouette is on the right path in my opinion... However...I feel like there is something odd that seems to be throwing the whole image off. It’s like I can see a lion, then a bull, then I see sort of a demon. I don’t know if it’s the facial features, or the negative space, or both...something just feels off. For starters I think if you’re going for a lion, the mane should be carried throughout the top of the head. Right now it looks like it’s got some kind of mullet going on that takes away from it looking completely like a lion...
  2. How about if you use the “U” for the “A” by turning it upside down and obviously adding a line to make it an A. It seems like currently the U is wider and makes the A seem off because it is more narrow. Or do vice-versa by flipping the A and removing the line to create the U. Not a drastic change, but it might make it seem more balanced.
  3. Can we get a collage of all these when it's all finished somehow? I was upset you weren't posting for a while but you came back and didn't skip a beat!
  4. First and foremost, I strongly believe the logo needs to be raised way up on the jersey, close to being aligned with the numbers. I also think that in order for this project to work, you should start with the teams current colors, and when you feel satisfied, switch to purple and yellow. Right now, the brightness of the colors is taking center stage to the whole project, and I think most of us could agree that the logo is a really great starting point and you're on to something here so let's focus on that aspect first. With that said...I really enjoy the "LA" shield logo, along with the silhouette of the crown. I do agree with others that it feels too simple, but not by much. Hopefully you won't get too drastic with changes because I have a feeling that the more subtle the changes are, the better the outcome will be. I do feel that the point at the bottom seems unnecessary because it kind of drags your eyes to the bottom of the logo. Maybe make the black outline of that point be less prominent for starters? It may look better after that, not sure.
  5. I also prefer the blue yoke right there with you. I do however feel ike the "Weagle" needs a thicker white outline around it for the dark jerseys.
  6. i like the right, he looks more like he's not to be messed with!!! The left, in my opinion is like he's telling someone to stop right where they are. But it's ultimately your decision.
  7. The Orlando Dragons is by far my favorite!!!
  8. Yes, exactly what I had in mind. I still don't like the football logo's left hand though. I feel like it the palm should be facing away and we should see the back of the hand instead. Something like the picture I'm adding. BUT.... keep your guy's arm outstretched the way it already is, don't change that: Other than that, these are really cool and I love all the different variations!
  9. I think the football and hockey logos need some fine-tuning. For the football guy: - I think the white patch between the arm holding the football and the chest/body should be turned into a white outline so there is a jersey colored space in-between. - Overall I like the design, but I think he should be leaning forward in an aggressive manner. Right now he just seems to be casually walking with a football instead of getting ready to stiff-arm a defender. The hockey guy: - Same as with the football one regarding the over-abundance of white on the left side, turn the white patches into even outlines. - I feel the right shoulder doesn't mimic the yellow logo used as the source material. Notice on that one how the shoulder is separated from the head, I think you need to do that with your version. Create some kind of gap there because the shoulder looks way out of place to me.
  10. I love this. You were going for white and green in the dark jersey right? Well whatever image effects you're using make the white look like a really light silver, and I'd have to say that I actually like that sooooo much better than if it was just white. It would give them a fresh upgrade in my opinion. Definitely that new green, and a light silver would be perfect for the Jets to make a statement that they're ready to be a relevant team in the league.
  11. These are all really good. The Mad Ants is amazing compared to the real-life one. Yours is actually mad, while the real-life one looks sad lmao. My thoughts on the Toros: Remove that lower horn on the bull, it's out of proportion and looks off, you really don't need it there and I think that would improve the look 10 fold. Also I think the white underneath the head could be filled in with the grey, just my personal preference.
  12. I can't pick a favorite anymore. I love the gradient on the Ravens one, don't ever take it away!!! And the Raiders with the bold grey outline, it just works perfectly. I'd like to see the actual lion primary logo on the Detroit ones, maybe....I don't know, they look so good without it, but I feel like it's such a nice logo that maybe it could work? They grey set is incredible. I'm all over the place here because these are so cool, keep it up!
  13. Are there two posts with this same concept? Honestly, I don't like the main logo at all. I can't tell that it's a plane. I first see a mountain, then I see like a "V", then a "J", then I think I'm looking at a knockoff of the Nike logo, then i say to myself that it looks splattered on the jersey.......That's just too many things my mind tries to figure out when looking at something that should be bold and have a sense of balance. There is no balance here besides the red circle. I'm sorry but it's just way too abstract for my liking. And the colors and jerseys just say "New York Rangers" to me. Then you have a grey outline over the "Jets" shoulder patches, but nowhere else is there any hint of grey. Like I said in the other post with the same stuff. Get rid of everything except the wordmark and start over. I wouldn't even worry about the jersey at all yet. I'm just being honest here. I love the "WINNIPEG" as I said before, but that grey, cloudy outline should be removed in my opinion. I like the "ETS" part from the "JETS" wordmark, but the "J" just seems too wide and doesn't compliment the other letters very well. Also, the fonts aren't the same for "WINNIPEG" or the "JETS". A sports team should have a recognizable identity, but having two different fonts for the city name, and the team name really doesn't represent a profession organization to me.