DawgPacPBH Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 what do you think guys? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 That's good work! I really like the wordmark, it is very unique! The colors also mix very well!However, I think you should have larger lines in the owl face, because they will get lost if the logo is smaller or if you're looking at it from far away...Other than that, it looks very good! Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 I made an owl logo once, looked a little like that.This is a great start! I'm quite impressed DawgPacPBH. I have a few comments...It looks like a cartoon owl. To make it look more like a logo, perhaps try adding heavier detailing to the major features. Stronger lines are key. He also looks a little chubby... maybe take those lines out that make him look like he's got neck fat.Lastly, although I admire the attempt at consistency within the wordmark, I think it is more important to have similarly weighted lines than having all the lines present. In your case, I'd use a black outline of the same weight as the "Owls" black outline, and just go with white text for Oceanside... there's just not enough room for the vegas gold there.Good work! Animals and people are IMO some of the toughest things to design, and you've done quite well here! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 16, 2004 Author Share Posted July 16, 2004 ill change it on monday. im goin to NY for the weekend. leave more comments for me! peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan9 Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 awesome work manif u make the lines heavier u got a winner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 17, 2004 Author Share Posted July 17, 2004 bumpity peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 17, 2004 Author Share Posted July 17, 2004 okay so, i didnt do it yet, but the next revisions are likely to be more realistic eyes..like Sy's, and a better head shape and less detail but bolder and designed better. that sound right? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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