C-Squared Posted September 21, 2018 Share Posted September 21, 2018 I am creating logos for a series of new semi-pro basketball leagues in Buffalo, NY... the logos won't see a ton of use outside of uniforms, so shoehorning basketballs in wasn't crucial... just finished the first two for the men's and women's leagues that will sort of run concurrent thematically, just hoping for a few extra sets of eyes to make sure I didn't miss anything... any feedback is appreciated!! My TeePublic Shop My Instagram Art Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted September 22, 2018 Share Posted September 22, 2018 Nice theming between the two, while also giving each their own flavor. Where her crown and head meet up is a bit awkward. Is there a reason why you chose not to have the part in her hair join up enough to at least make it a more natural division between head and crown? I'm guessing that in the non-screened or overlay mode the crown and her skin are more distinctly different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C-Squared Posted September 22, 2018 Author Share Posted September 22, 2018 11 hours ago, darkpiranha said: Nice theming between the two, while also giving each their own flavor. Where her crown and head meet up is a bit awkward. Is there a reason why you chose not to have the part in her hair join up enough to at least make it a more natural division between head and crown? I'm guessing that in the non-screened or overlay mode the crown and her skin are more distinctly different. I actually did it on purpose, but I have no idea why... I will fix that up, thank you!! My TeePublic Shop My Instagram Art Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 The angle of her arm seems like it's wrong. She must have very flexible elbows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 10 hours ago, Jake3.roo said: The angle of her arm seems like it's wrong. She must have very flexible elbows. Second that. Especially because the flow of the hair kind of gives the illusion of a shoulder. So that arm interrupts that in a physiologically impossible kind of way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C-Squared Posted September 27, 2018 Author Share Posted September 27, 2018 Thanks for the feedback, guys! These are the little details in sports logos that drive me crazy when designers miss them... added an update! My TeePublic Shop My Instagram Art Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 Yas queen! Much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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