ramsjetsthunder Posted January 19, 2020 Share Posted January 19, 2020 I've created this elephant logo that I'm pretty proud of, but I feel like something is still off. Perhaps something with all the blank space on the elephant's cheek. Any tips would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvk Posted January 19, 2020 Share Posted January 19, 2020 Can’t see the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted January 19, 2020 Author Share Posted January 19, 2020 Just now, mvk said: Can’t see the image Fixed, my bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvk Posted January 19, 2020 Share Posted January 19, 2020 That’s a pretty good logo. Don’t see too many elephant logos in that profile view with trunk up. Understand your thoughts on the cheek, perhaps the ear needs enlarged and extends down towards that a bit. Doesn’t look off as is though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted January 21, 2020 Share Posted January 21, 2020 The ear opening shape is in an odd place right now, I'd extend a line to divide the ear and the cheek. The main issue with the logo is that there is a lot of detail towards the right of the logo, and very little at the left. I'd reduce the detail on the trunk at least a little. Also, the mouth feels very awkward. It looks relatively anatomically correct, but still awkward. The expression on its face is more sad than anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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