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"Rampaging Stallions" is a long name for a team, and 5 syllables is a mouthful. Unless Rampaging is a town name I've never heard of, you also did the two words in markedly different ways. Other teams with 2-word names (Red Sox, Blue Devils, Mighty Ducks, Ragin' Cajuns) generally make the team name all one style. Unless there is a compelling reason to keep "Rampaging" in the mix, I'd ditch it. You conveyed motion with a sense of rampaging malice with the design of the horse.

All in all, it's very nicely rendered. I would also work on the bottom edge of the horse, because the orientation of the eye draws the viewer to the empty space between the head and the lettering, which I don't think was your intent. Also, if the horse is a rampaging stallion, the mane is very neat and coiffed. Needs something to show reckless unruly behavior.

But that's minor stuff. Overall, it's beautiful. Nicely done.

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